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Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

0 posted 2000-04-30 04:00 PM

Tried to forget you, but to no avail.
Love found you only in a fairy tale.

My heart has decided you'll always be
A part of my dreams and memory.

I'm trying to lead my life and go on
But sometimes sing a lonely heart song.

It would not have been so sad had it not have been so true
But feel I'm going to live the rest of my days lost in loving you.

There are days where I want to see you and hold you so bad I can't breathe.
Then there are days where I feel content in knowing I loved and told you and seek comfort in me.

And yet I know things can never be any other way than the way they are
But, I will always care about you, even if for now it is from afar.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-04-30 04:07 PM

It would not have been so sad had it not have been so true
But feel I'm going to live the rest of my days lost in loving you.

There are days where I want to see you and hold you so bad I can't breathe.
Then there are days where I feel content in knowing I loved and told you and seek comfort in me.
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Gemini...
this is BEAUTIFUL!!
very touching and tender..
I feel your ache an longing in this...
and I relate to it all too well.
loved the line...
>>"hold you so bad I can't breathe."
man do I know what you mean *sigh* (smile)

very well written and expressed piece here.
very.

~as always, Take Care,JM~
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I know it's been a long road
To get these towns behind me and I
Will gladly reap what we may sow--
I am there for you ...
and you're there for me ...
Are you waiting for
Heart in hand
Woman and man
See me where I stand I am
Heart
Heart in hand
~vertical horizon~

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

2 posted 2000-04-30 04:10 PM

Uh, to say this one hit home with me would be a dire understatement. You have my every sympathy and empathy on these feelings and longings. Very well done.

Michael

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

3 posted 2000-05-01 10:10 PM

Thank you Janet Marie, thank you Michael. Your kind words are appreciated.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-05-02 09:13 PM

I understand this ache

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