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Drunken Fool
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Drunken Fool Just one more drink then we can leave Honey you’re a goddess, I do believe Help me get up after this drink And slow down this room it's hard to think Thanks for asking, I'd love to dance But as you can see I pissed my pants Hey wait for me I'm not that drunk I've got a change of clothes in my trunk Ah don't worry, I can drive All these years and I'm still alive Same to you baby, your not so cool What do you take me for, a drunken fool 04/24/2000 |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
I laughed when i read this, but I know it's not funny.... very poignant in an angry, bitter, yet humorous way. Thanks for posting. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Hi, Insect, I agree with Doreen. This funny in a way,yet in another it is kinda sad. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
ain't no fool like a drunken fool, funny and very meaningfull. Parker |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
doreen peri, it is meant to be humorous but any other thoughts are fine too. Jeffery Carter, hi and sad is OK, some of us have been there as well, during a binge or two. Haleyja, you ain't fooling. Thank you all for responding and watch for the fool, I don't think it's last call. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
LOL Insect, this is cute and clever, but the subject is sad -- It does the heart good though to be able to stop and see the humor in life. Thanks for sharing netswan |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***insect, welcometo passions. this is a great poem. funny or not, i really enjoed it.  i'll be looking out for your work from now on. I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Well couldn't let this disappear just yet, mr bug. A very funny strong message. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
netswan…Sorry for the delayed response to your response so I'd like to respond because I'm responsible for responding to your response. Umm thanks! ***mete out…Greatly appreciated. I enjoyed drinking your reply. Thank you. Haleyja…Thanks for bringing me up…I mean throwing me up to the …I mean puking……PUTTING MY Poem to the top again…. I knew I shouldn't have had that last drink…blaaaahh!!! Just kidding!! Hey! Can you tall me a caxi!! Anks athot! Tank you all for Thresponding. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Insect~ I started laughing, then thought maybe I shouldn't be, then I read it was supposed to be funny. Whew!  This is great!  -SEA |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
SEA…I think I'll have another one! |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
This guy should consider wearing a Depends the next time he goes out! How embarrassing! LOL One has to be REAL drunk to wet down his leg! ROFLMAO but yes, tis sad! Thanks for another funny, there Mr. Bug!  |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
While I have not done anything as embrassing as that I had made a mild fool of myself once or twice while under the influence, well I am student so it has to be expected. love the black humour, great poem. I really liked that one.... did I ever tell ywah that yus were my bezt friendz...I am..hic..notz drunk..or anysthinz. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
poetFemmeFatale…Or take a back pack of clothes to the bar Instead of the car ha! ha! oops! PML brian madden…Hey friend don't pass out ….it looks like your catching some Zzzz 's Here have a double!! SEA…You are a great sea…I mean thank you greatly! PML opps! Not again! Spank you all for responding (Pissed Myself Laughing) |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~HeeHee,....Good one!!! |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
SpitFire…Nice name. I'll drink to that! Not many poets in here have a plain name. Ha! Ha! That didn't just fly over your head. He! He! LOL Thanks for refilling |
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AMaZing Junior Member
since 2000-06-26
Posts 10 |
LOL I can't stop laughing....the poem was great and the replies even greater...Keep up the great work!! :0) |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
AmaZing…Thankz alozzz! Zzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzSnort!zzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzSnort!zzzzzzz………. Zzzzhack!!ahumm!WOW! What time is it? WHAT!!! 6:00am OHH! My pounding head! I'm never drinking again! ASPRIN!!!ASPRIN!!! Help me! And what happened to my pants! |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Deleted! [This message has been edited by insect (edited 08-13-2000).] |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
My quik view didn't show every part of my rainbow poem so i had to use this window to get it right because it took to much work to do so i wanted it to turn out right sorry to us up this space but it really helped me. I am just new with this computer but still learning [This message has been edited by insect (edited 08-13-2000).] |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Sorry just a test for Prince of Poetry deleted [This message has been edited by insect (edited 10-09-2000).] |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Deleted sorry! [This message has been edited by insect (edited 11-05-2000).] |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Yeah yeah..sure you're sorry for deleting so many times. Just admit it! You wanted this on the top again and again and again and that's the only reason why you did. Didn't you?..DIDN'T YOU???(kidding!)LMAO! Actually this is the first time I've read this and it's halarious! No wonder it was so easy for you to be the drunk in my "It's You" poem.LOL Had a good laugh! Thanks! kat [This message has been edited by kat (edited 11-12-2000).] |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Thanks kat did you get any vanilla ice cream lately!!? |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Hmmmmmmmmm...did you do something to my ice cream poem?? I better go check! LOL |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
No but you'll see Oh loved that poem very much It was delicious [This message has been edited by insect (edited 11-14-2000).] |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
deleted [This message has been edited by insect (edited 11-27-2000).] |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Sorry just a test Deleted [This message has been edited by insect (edited 02-24-2001).] |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
deleted [This message has been edited by insect (edited 02-23-2001).] |
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Love Police New Member
since 2001-03-02
Posts 3All over the world and beyond |
test |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
deleted [This message has been edited by insect (edited 04-23-2001).] |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Deleted ...just testing something....sorry! [This message has been edited by insect (04-29-2003 09:13 PM).] |
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