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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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The funny smell of air in spring Brings a whiff of freshness into my nostrils, The fleeting shadows with the light, With the warm shine of summer sun. As I often wait for morning to begin, As I do for the winter to end As I wait for the flowers to bloom, And as I do for the grass to grow. Instilling a new-found confidence, Often perks up my prudence, And I dance into the air of spring, With a new spring in my steps. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
~~nice springtime verse~~ think we all fee that way when Spring arrives. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
So we always do Danny, A frosty Winter yields a pleasant spring, When the dogwood, she smiles , gives a ring... thanks for reading, sudhir |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Hi Sudhir! Wonder how this one slipped by -----) Lovely -- spring does bring such freshness and a new bounce into one's step. Sigh, now if it would only quit raining LOL netswan |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Refreshing and uplifting to say the least! Thank you for such a sweet reading. CocoBaci |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Lovely spring thoughts, Sudhir! Denise |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
netswan, CocoBaci and Denise, Sorry to not have noticed that you had posted wonderful words for me over here. I had overlooked this somehow. Thank you all for your ever present support.. Regards, sudhir |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, I think we all feel this way about spring. Enjoyed the read. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
We do too!!! Seymour, I am glad that you enjoyed the read....IF you enjoyed this, then this must be good  Regards, sudhir. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i loved the word play but dont remind me about the lawn mowing |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks Walt, thanks a lot. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Really loved this one, Sudhir! Corinne |
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Rocketman New Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 6 |
it's like awakening from a restful sleep, the way Spring makes us feel. What a wonderful interpretation, I enjoyed the first line about how Spring smells...so true. I look forward to reading others from you. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you, Corinne. I am glad you loved Rocketman, WELCOME TO PASSIONS...and thanks. |
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shilpi Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 73 |
its a wonderful writing, kinda feel refreshed.....something like a new thing is dawning !! good work, sudhir |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks Shilpi, for reading and posting your response... Looks like spring is fleeting away now, and summer is breaking through.... Regards, sudhir Life is like a painting, That in an art gallery is left hanging, Though many come just to look at it, A very few actually come to enjoy it. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Spring, you are lucky!! It is autumn turning into winter earlier than usual here! Lovely words you share with us here. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Brrrr...this was great to read but I'm afraid I'm downunder and like Lizzie we are starting to freeze out buts off here  we have a long wait for spring and after reading this just can't wait.Thanks Sudhir Love tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh ... I feel the same way Sudhir. This is my favorite season, and you've captured the freshness beautifully, lovely verse. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Lizzie, Tracie, Kit, Thanks you all for reading this one and boosting my ego up... your words mean a lot... Tracie and Lizzie, well, guess what, seasons change and soon it will be spring at aussie land...just hold on tight. Kit, I am glad to have written about your favourite season... Regards, Sudhir |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now, do one for summer...for it is almost upon us... Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Karilea, I am gearing up for that... pretty soon I will write one on summer, I hope it comes out well... regards, sudhir |
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