Open Poetry #7 |
~Nature's Freedom Haiku~ |
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
*For some reason, lately, all I have been doing is living, breathing and dreaming haikus and senryus, I can't stop writing them! ~NATURE'S FREEDOM HAIKU~ 5-7-5 Crashing ocean waves and soaring eagle above both wondrous and free *By Melissa Honeybee* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ And doing a right-fine job of it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
to the top with this haiku. wonderful as always keep them coming. ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany Culture, alienation, boredom and despair" |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Don't stop Melissa, go with the flow. This is great! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Melissa, we don't mind!!! Please continue!! This was wonderful. . . can picture it in my mind right now!!! Excellent!! -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Melissa, I really love this one, thank you for sharing. Cerenity |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Well, you certainly write them beautifully, Melissa! Elizabeth And this I say to you: why? Why? Just tell me why, so I can understand. Why? |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Very nice, this is a sweet little Haiku, truly lovely, so simple, not typical, I thank you . L.of.L. Tom . Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you all for the kind replies and for the support Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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