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Love Absurd ( Good Morning, Love...)
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Love Absurd ( Good Morning, Love...) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Glistening of morning dew- fingerprints of loving you engraved word of love unheard hope resounds in this day through... heartbreak of unspoken word-- may our souls sing in harmony as break of dawn shines on the sea however it may be perturbed all logic, reason, now a curse... Hearts as one--together, beat, as rhyme should be to poetry much more than that you mean to me-- promise now, this hunger, yearn, to close my eyes sigh undenied-- sleep now, but to be with you... to dream so sweet of love absurd. [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 04-26-2000).] |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Very romantic and Beautiful!  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I enjoyed this read Serenity - well done! Roniece |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Serenity, Your heart speaks of love and your poetry beautifully expresses it my dear, thank you for sharing, Cerenity |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
Good poem, Serenity. Nice rhymes. |
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kimberly d New Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 4 |
nice to know someone shares my feelings, dreams are sometimes the only place to go for peace. thanx kimberly d |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Glistening of morning dew- fingerprints of loving you engraved word of love unheard hope resounds in this day through... heartbreak of unspoken word-- ------------- Hearts as one--together, beat, as rhyme should be to poetry much more than that you mean to me-- promise now, this hunger, yearn, to close my eyes sigh undenied-- sleep now, but to be with you... to dream so sweet of love absurd. ----------- serenity...I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!! girl this is exquisite...truly the ryhme and flow are SO perfect... and the emotions of it are SO YOU!! which is my fav part of your poetry... your "trademark longing" and Im so there with you-- me twin... *sigh* *smile* beautiful poem seren, really. take care sweetcheeks, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful poem, Serenity! I hope your dreams come true! Denise |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
This is a very touching poem~ Nice work~ Marie~ |
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