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Open Poetry #7

If you only knew

Cabral
New Member

since 2000-04-17

Posts 8
RI

0 posted 2000-04-25 02:15 AM

If you only knew

If you only knew how much I cared
If you only knew what I feel inside
If you only knew what I actually feared
If you only knew about the love I must hide
If you only knew how scared I am to love you
If you only knew what it was like to be pushed away
If you only knew that my love is true
If you only knew how much I have to say

But why is it that you don't know?
Because my love goes back five years ago
Because thats when it started to grow
Because we became best friends
Because I'll be there to the end
Because I promised not to hurt you
Because you don't know what you want to do
Because you never take time for you and me
Because your eyes are to blind to see
Because you don't look with your heart
Because if you did you'd know my love will never part

Jeffrey Carter

Member Elite

since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

1 posted 2000-04-25 02:28 AM

It's vey hard to get this emotion across, but you have done very well here.

Welcome to passions btw

All my love,
Jefrey

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

2 posted 2000-04-26 08:17 AM

Hi Cabral,

This was very nice I enjoyed it.
Thank you for the read and welcome to passions,

Cerenity

netswan
Senior Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 1369
Washington

3 posted 2000-04-26 08:23 AM

This is so heart rendering -- hope
it all works out.

netswan

kristi
Junior Member

since 2000-04-24

Posts 33
Yulee, FL

4 posted 2000-04-26 08:43 AM

Welcome!

I really love this poem. So simple and so personal.

amazon_lover
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

5 posted 2000-04-26 03:11 PM

Hi!
It's a beautiful one. I liked it very much.
When something is not obvious and should not be obvious it takes time for understanding to develop and mature. It's just a matter of time when you both will begin to understand unspoken words straight from heart. Just give it time !

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