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Water Kisses and hugs
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Water Kisses and hugs |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Water Kisses and Hugs Three years ago yesterday I got in a fight with you Three years ago tomorrow I lost my best friend Who could predict who or how Or why or exactly when? But somehow you fell in To the rushing water And sank right in Scratching Heather's arm and legs And she couldn't save you You went downstream panicking All the way, begging For God to save you But you were hugged by the water And nothing worked And on your 15th birthday--- Your funeral Everyone planted water kisses on your brow< !signature--> Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. [This message has been edited by Cuddlez (edited 04-26-2000).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
This was sad, but I enjoyed to poem. I feels written with love. Parker |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
yipe sad and a nice tribute well written yuh |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
It's sad but not a tribute..... Just a story of how she died(really) Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
~~nice tribute, well written~~ A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
love your quote danny... she finally has a headstone today, too  ).. three years after the factTime flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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