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Alienation |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Alienation The walls morbid and bare, soul climbing a mountain full of despair. Cavernous peaks of joyfulness, buried within avalanche of emotions denying happiness. Destructive alienation sledging time faltering imagination believing emptiness rights the crime. Iron cold bars greet happy faces, gorged mind seeing illusions lost in criminal places. Incompetence to relate to situations at hand buckles undone fate reeling please return me to promised land. [This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 04-26-2000).] |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Very descriptive Lost Dreamer - so darn sad netswan |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sad, Gloria. I wish you brighter days. Denise |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I forgot to say ((((HUGS)))) Denise |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
very sad poem ... you need to throw some stones in the river ... see if you can skip one all the way across Rex}>{{{{o> |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
netswan: Thanks for reading and replying Denise: Thanks a million, your so kind Rex: LOL, I couldn't skip a rock if I tried, and I have tried, right now it would probably hit a ripple and come back and clock me in the head...LOL Thanks for the laugh though  |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
you been visiting here again without my seeing you??? next time, say hi, k? |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Doreen: Forgive me for my rudeness, I will correct my behavior in the future. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
enjoyed |
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