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infinat3 sadn3ss Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 85somerset england |
Under moon and ignorant sun , lies a purple number one . Crawling through a neon desert , by a trumpet call left wounded and hurt . hid inside a paper bag , golden medal , porno mag . clutching mirror-man sand , blisters all over feet and hands . 109 in the shade , boy , he's really got it made . bionic , ironic , is it a castle or a mirage ? , or just another reflective badge ? . stolen off of the malignant troops , so dumb he could have made them jump through hoops . His spying on the enemy , should get him paid hansomly . freedom is the right to say 2 + 2 = 4 |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Interesting read.  I like the feel of it. |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***cabes, wow what was the running thru your head when you wrote this one? this is great...it has a great sense of urgency... wow I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
like a shooting st*r, whoooosh! up we go! I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
and again, fly my pretty, FLY! I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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Enola Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 138England |
Wow! I dunno what else to say. You're literally whooping ass boy! The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition. |
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PericolosoAmore Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 31 |
This was fantastic. write another. how did you learn to write lie that. I shall look the rest of your poetry up. P.A. |
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