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David2
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since 2000-03-22

Posts 407

0 posted 2000-05-07 03:50 PM

Lover's Lives

For years to love alone with no recourse
To never vanquish coarse and shallow care,
To live with paltry tools that brought remorse
And left one only loneliness to share.
But when true love caressed myweary hand
And whispered that she too had loved alone,
Together we began to understand
That love must from a seed be fully grown.
This seed of unity we nurtured dear
As now our blossom flourishes and thrives,
To bless us with these joys that know no peer,
This sweet entanglement of lover's lives.

For truly where one stood now stands but two
To laugh and learn and live and love anew.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-05-07 04:32 PM

But when true love caressed myweary hand
And whispered that she too had loved alone,
Together we began to understand
That love must from a seed be fully grown.
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For truly where one stood now stands but two
To laugh and learn and live and love anew.
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you were expecting me..right? *smile*
I like the way your garden grows my friend.
this is lovely...starts out so melancholy but then turns beautiful in its emotions and devotion.
very nice,once again

take care, jm

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

2 posted 2000-05-07 04:36 PM

So sweet this poetry you've captured every essence of the subject.
Thankyou for such a great reading!
CocoBaci

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

3 posted 2000-05-07 04:50 PM

--David

As always your work leaves me smiling and with lots of thinking to do...this one was no exception. you have truly captured a wonderful piece here and i loved the degree of emotions through the entire piece. you have a wonderful style of writing my friend and i enjoy reading your work very much!

take care,
amy

~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-05-07 11:36 PM

Very beautiful, David! Your sonnets are always a delight!

Denise

netswan
Senior Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 1369
Washington

5 posted 2000-05-07 11:49 PM

David I am very confused - I posted
a reply to this when it first went up.
And, now I am not here to tell you what
I said.

I expect to open every poem of yours
and enjoy my read. This sonnet did not
disappoint me. Lovely

netswan

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2000-05-08 03:46 AM

David2~
Enjoyed the lovley sentimentality
of this sonnet.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

David2
Member

since 2000-03-22

Posts 407

7 posted 2000-05-08 05:02 PM

Netswan,
I am sorry, but I inadvertently posted this twice and your reply was on the other post, I did read it and I thank you for your comments. While I am here I want to thank all of you who took the time to read this, I am very aware of how much traffic there is here and it is humbling to know you took time to read my work. Thank you.
David2

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