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She blew me a kiss ( part two )
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She blew me a kiss ( part two ) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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She blew me a kiss (part Two) Although she physically flew away A part of her was left to stay. Her essence left a gist so bright, It goes to sleep with me at night. She whispers in the dark to me, And always colors what I see. She disappears each brake of dawn, And I can't wait, the night reborn. The breath of flowers left in air, Leaves flavor and her nectar there. Each touch of petals fragile thin, Reminds me of her velvet skin. And when she calls me on the phone, It drives away the beast alone. And I am calm and full of sigh, But all my feelings magnify. It's then, I wish upon a star And curse the distance of the far. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Seymour, your part two is in direct parallel to a part two of my own...how did you do that?? Beautiful, fragrant words. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Meadow, Pure accident, thank you so much for the read and comment. *L* |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Wow~ I think I like part 2 better~ Very nice~ Marie~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
....And the plot thickens. Now waiting for part 3 Beautiful writing, Sy Love ya Liz |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) **Sigh** I'm swept away once again....beautiful writing!Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Very lovely, wistful and sweet! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mariee66, why thank you Marie. Elizabeth, I think the third one will be a long time comming. Love Sy Buterfly, Very sweet, I thank you. Rosemary, Thank you so much. *L* |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Wow, these were a beautiful couple of poems. They really touched me. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
She may know about that part too, for she took it with her as she flew.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The breath of flowers left in air, Leaves flavor and her nectar there. Each touch of petals fragile thin, Reminds me of her velvet skin. And when she calls me on the phone, It drives away the beast alone. And I am calm and full of sigh, But all my feelings magnify. It's then, I wish upon a star And curse the distance of the far. -------------- and as in part one...I will say... SY I LOVE WHEN YOU WRITE LIKE THIS!!! your serious and romantic poems are so great. perfect!!! take care poetic friend, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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