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Preponderance of Love
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Preponderance of Love |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Must it be gentle, softly spoke, or screamed to heaven up above? Must it be dash-and-circumstance-- mortal step unto God's dance? With my heart, my soul, betrothed, how shall I ever speak of love? Should there be trial and tribulation? Violins, and roses sweet? Shivering in sweet elation? (I long to sing this incantation...) And all therein, the musings of-- Tell me how to speak of love... Are there rules? Is Law involved? A mystery, unresolved. To beat of wing of a white dove-- however can I write of Love? |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Good question....Just write from the heart...I think....on second thought...good question!!! All my love, Jeffrey |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Why wonder how? You just provided a very thorough (how do you spell that?) blueprint, you poet you. Mike p.s. Get your damn slug up and running!  Later. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Should there be trial and tribulation? Violins, and roses sweet? Shivering in sweet elation? (I long to sing this incantation...) And all therein, the musings of-- Tell me how to speak of love... --------------------- you just did here my dear and you did it with poetic perfection... WOW this one is superb my girl!! and another WOW to a read and reply from BSQ you know your really GOOD when he stops by LOL loved this one!! you too, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You've done some powerful work with this one sis...hope we all find the answers soon!! (If you find out a'fore me, lemme know, will ya?  )Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ The fact is ... this is beautifully done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
JC---your sweetness never ceases to move me...thank you luvie, you brighten my day--er--nights? Mike---thank you for the high compliment--methinks---love to you--and don't you dare cringe when I am sincere.... JM--m'twin---I wish you twice the ecstasy I have--though half is more than enough. Hugs Devina--love you lots, sweet sister mine... let us just let it happen... Mom-----special to my heart--you understand EVERYTHING---for that I thank you. |
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