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I'm Jealous
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I'm Jealous |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
I'm Jealous ----------------------- I'm Jealous I do declare Of those with such an air With sonnet upon sonnet Piled on their bonnet Why not me I sometimes ask Why do I not have a past Of love poems and like poems Behind me I guess I just need to relax And tell everyone to pass Me by.. Unless they have a poem Hidden in their head Just for me, of course *Yes... It's corny, and the rhyme not always consistent but what else was I supposed to do???*< !signature--> Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. [This message has been edited by Cuddlez (edited 04-24-2000).] |
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sweetchild Junior Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 37 |
last lines kinda confusing, but i like it  I'm with ya on this one! |
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sweetchild Junior Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 37 |
last lines kinda confusing, but i like it I'm with ya on this one! |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Ok guys.. the last lines are somewhat fixed... Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Sounds like a good place to start a collection of writing to put "behind you" You are certainly in the right place to get inspired. All my love, Jeffrey |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
who ever said I had to be a poet to post here? nice slight jeffrey.. the all my love was classy too Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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