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You Never Cease to Amaze Me
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You Never Cease to Amaze Me |
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SorrowsMystress Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 178I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I don't live in one particular area, Just wherever I end up. 
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You never cease to amaze me There's a surprise around every corner You always have something up your sleeve. Just when I think Things are mundane Normal Day to day You do something That special something That catches my attention... You never cease to amaze me There's no need to even try You could be standing right in front of me And I'm astounded by your Presence You glance in my direction Make me feel like I'm the only one on earth Making my heart race, my pulse quicken Making me melt into infinity..... You never cease to amaze me You're strong and unstopable You come at me in full force Making me fall harder Deeper In love with you.... You never cease to amaze me I think I've told you a thousand times It doesn't matter if you Hand pick me flowers Write a response to my poetry Show up on my doorstep With that unmistakeable smile.... You just never cease to amaze me....... "It was my love that did us both to death. " -Sylvia Plath |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
shhhh, dont tell anyone,but I think your in love*smile* your secret is safe with me.  very well written poem of anticipation. very nice. take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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PrincessPoet Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133Long Beach, Calif. |
Love is in the Midst of me. The Love we desire is aready within us. -A Course in Miracles Poetry & Frienship, From: PrincessPoet |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
What a wonderful poem, Mystress. I hope you are amazed and pleased as I am. Enjoyed this immensely. Joanna What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
What better way to say "You never cease to amaze me" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"You glance in my direction..make me feel like I'm the only one on earth." I enjoyed reading this. I feel this way about a woman I know. James |
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rene Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 113 |
i like to read poems that make me smile. thankyou |
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