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My Song
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My Song |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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My Song A sweet lullaby mellow song euphonious joviality harshness free you play for my heart and I sway to the melody arising from within you a thumping slow base beats from my chest in conjunction with the musical arrangement of words You, I sing with and dance with you are my song What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful.  Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
DA what a beautiful song Keep dancing  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is beautiful...I love how you described your heartbeat!!!  |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Marvelous,..hehe. You've captured this feeling with such greatness. *Nice read for sure |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Oh, this was so beautiful... I loved it. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ Beauteous song becomes you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is wonderful DA. . . it's true that our hearts sing the most wonderful song of all. . . Excellent poem. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Dark Angel~ WOW! All I can say is excellent writing! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Dark Angel! Denise |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Temptress, thank you! ------------------ Angel, hey I will keep dancing thanks so much Hon. ------------------ Sharon thanks honey so much for your lovely reply. ------------------ SpitFire, glad you enjoyed the read!! ------------------ Thank you LoveBug ------------------ Why thank you Marge, as always. ------------------ Sven yes they most certainly do....Thank you! ------------------ Terry WOW! so happy you liked!! ------------------ Denise, thanks so very much Hon What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 05-12-2000).] |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
~~very nice indeed~~~ thank you for responding to my caged bird! best wishes, dh |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I enjoyed your song, it has a nice rhythm, I would sing along only I am tone deaf. |
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rene Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 113 |
top notch da, structure impressed me. ps, was colderidge the life guy? |
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