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~Horizon~ |
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REBECCA ALLYN Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 91Lima,Ohio |
As I sit here and watch the sun fall beneath the picture perfect sky I can't help but stop myself and demand to know why The love I have for you continues each day to grow I try so hard to show it I can't believe how much I need you to know Every time you kiss my lips I'm so over whelmed I close my eyes my thoughts run deep You grasp my hand and hold me close as I begin to weep Time and time again I can feel myself fall Please put me through all these emotions I want to feel it all All of this I'm feeling is so brand new I know that all of this I want you are feeling too So together we will reach our destination in love forever more As we watch the sun slip through the picture perfect horizon |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Beautiful...I hope your love together is eternal. "So together we will reach our destination in love forever more As we watch the sun slip through the picture perfect horizon" I love that image. great poem. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Hey Rebecca....You have really etched a wonderful image in my mind with this one. How Beautiful, breath taking!  Thank you for sharing this! ~Sheri |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Rebbeca! That was so beautiful. I just keep waiting for the day. I love her so much and its a long wait for me to see her. But I just see her and the times we had ,everyday in my minds eye and I'm just waiting. Thanks for the read. ((((hugs)))))))) A_L |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is oh so beautiful, Rebecca! Simply beautiful! Denise |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is excellent..indeed you have so perfectly captuted those intense feelings of anticipation and fascination that we crave so when it is all new and exciting. superb work. take care, jm It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving How one move just puts me by myself There you go just trusting someone else Now I know I put us both through hell ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me And I'm not sayin We ever had the right to hold on I just didn't wanna let you get away from me. ~MB20~Leave |
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