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~Salvation In Surrender~
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~Salvation In Surrender~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Listen not to voices that speak only of lies and confusion, their jealous haze shall neither taint nor fade this perfect and poetic illusion. Deceit falls now on only deafened ears ... this between us ... they cannot divide, This unison of fate, sweetly entrusted ... shall not be questioned or denied. Words of poison are to never again be recognized by these eyes of mine, surrender be my salvation, thy whispered devotion heard ... thy words be divine. Bound by common threads of love, a tapestry laced with faith, trust, and desire ... woven with golden strands of commitment and contentment ... all things a heart does require. Jaded eyes need now to only look away ... for they are blinded by our light, as we breathe in the many pleasures of this gift ... absolution now in sight. Though forces work to sow seeds of fear and doubt ... no promises were ever broken, hearts and souls entwined, the ties that bind grow stronger ... the truth now so sweetly spoken. Janet Marie for my partner in rhyme, as always, thank you for the inspiration. Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Janet, Your partner in rhyme must be pretty special to inspire such beautiful words as these. Bound by common threads of love, a tapestry laced with faith, trust, and desire ... woven with golden strands of commitment and contentment ... all things a heart does require. Jaded eyes need now to only look away ... for they are blinded by our light, as we breathe in the many pleasures of this gift ... absolution now in sight. Though forces work to sow seeds of fear and doubt ... no promises were ever broken, hearts and souls entwined, the ties that bind grow stronger ... the truth now so sweetly spoken. All my love, Jeffrey |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
Excellent dish here. I like lots. Explain, please. Nice style and rhymes. (scheme.) |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Beautiful words from a beatutiful heart. Yes your partner in rhyme must be pretty special....for he has you  Through adversity and struggle love of the purest shall only deepen and remain stronger than it did when you began. **AW hugs and BF kisses** S.S. and it's wonderful to see your *smile* back again Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Janet Marie~ Dear, you have "WOW"ed me again!! Absolutely Lovely!  ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Your partner in rhyme is very lucky to have such a wonderful poet in thier life. You write so beautifully and this is one is no exception. Marina |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bound by common threads of love, a tapestry laced with faith, trust, and desire ... woven with golden strands of commitment and contentment ... all things a heart does require. This sounds like the perfect lovey love to me...and your poem is beautiful!! |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
BEG~~~you shine! |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear Janet Marie: this is so very beautiful. so romantic! " bound by common threads of love". You've outdone yourself again. I love this poem! Love, Ellie 02 |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Beautifully written~ This is great! Marie~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
THANK YOU ALL...for such glowing praise... I appreciate you all so very much. Hi ELLIE!! so nice to have you in open!! thank you. brandon...Lets just say this is my poetic reply to actions of envy. its about not letting someone with jaded intentions cause my heart problems. make sense? thanks to all here for the read and replies. take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Ah Janet, a true surrender to you desired one. He must be very special. this was so nice of you to share. Parker |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Janet Marie! Denise |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
janet... such an awesome piece wow! simply charming...sucha smooth flow... loved it? why aint't in the book??? If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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