Open Poetry #7 |
New Adventures in Late-Night Therapy |
Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
LET me TELL YOU ThAT tHIS IS ALL WRONg. EVeRYTHING IS DIFFERENT FROm WHAT IT should HAVE been. NOTHING IS MUCH MORE Than MEAR WORDS PAINTED ON GROUND EARTH, WITH THE PRESENCE OF HUMAN HANDS. I’m not so sure just were we a re going. I have no clue just were we have been. Art is confusing to me, it’s been so distorted IN Little Purple, pink PILLS that killed the MINDS of those that eat them. I SCREAM with indifference as people don’t seem to notice. I’m not at all just what they had never thought I would be. I’M SURE YOU DON’T UNDERSTAND AT ALL WHAT I AM SAYING, hell I don’t often know just what will come out. Just letting it flow UNDERSTANDING IS MISUNDERSTOOD. Love me or leave me, but I'm never what you thought. It all looks so different when you rip away the eyes. Let me tell you that this is all................ "Lord help us all." understanding is misunderstood |
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7 Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 113Amherst, MA, USA |
Wow... very creative. I esp. love: NOTHING IS MUCH MORE Than MEAR WORDS PAINTED ON GROUND although the lack of formatting here doesn't do it justice. Great insight. Nice to meet you! 7 P.S. Just a funny thought - the antidepressants I take (welbutrin) are purple... you probably weren't thinking of that but sometimes I wonder if they kill my mind. Some people think that, I don't, but it's certainly something to think about. P.P.S. Another thought, and this has nothing to do with the poem, so forgive me. The writing on the purple pills forms a smiley face. Ironic, huh? |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
7- thanks for your comments. I'm glad that you enjoyed. I am aware that the lack of formating is a bit off-setting but that is the point. I was trying to show discomfort, and unorganized confustion. understanding is misunderstood |
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