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When And Where (in memory of a friend)
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When And Where (in memory of a friend) |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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When And Where (in memory of a friend) As I sit here on the shore and watch the waves roll in It brings back the memories of when and where again I can see your deep blue eyes upon the cresent moon and all I can think about is that sunlit afternoon Back when we were only kids who thought we knew it all Always running head on in life Never afraid to take a fall I can't believe just how naive we really were back then Thinking we could conquer the world when we were merely men We failed to see all the stop signs life threw up along the way 'Til you were abruptly taken from me on that fateful day I wish that I could rub a lamp and bring you back again As I sit here thinking of a time of when and where again ******************************* In loving memory of Robert Christopher Beaver 02/18/70-06/24/92 I shall never forget you my friend. |
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Daysleeper Member
since 2000-04-23
Posts 119 |
That's powerful Jeffery. I'm sure he knows you wrote this... and I'm sure he's proud of you. ...Daysleeper... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Jeffrey* This is such a touching tribute to a dear friend..I have tears in my eyes as I read, it's truly beautiful. I'm so sorry for your loss of your friend. I offer you **Angel Wing Hugs** for they ask nothing in return. Take care of you. Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is so perfect Jeffery... a wonderful tribute... I was touched by the wisdom found in the things you looked back on... very well written emotions here. take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
I sense a very caring spirit that radiates from your poems. Good writing. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Very well done, Jeffrey - a lovely tribute --- and so sad yet, wise. hugs, netswan |
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FreeSoul Junior Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 14 |
Very nicely written. Sad, but it has so much power in it. -FreeSoul |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This is a beatiful tribute for your friend Jeffery. It sounds like you too were very close. Friends are very special people. Well done. Marina |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thanks guys, I must say this was not an easy one to write. It has been in the works for almost 8 years. I just couldn't bring myself to put the words on paper til now. I stopped by Chris' grave today just to say hi and I knew that he was proud . I can't say how I knew I just did. Any body ever get that feeling? Chris was my best friend . He was killed in a car crash. I was the driver and I walked away without a scratch. For a long time I couldn't forgive myself, but when I was at his grave today I just knew that he had forgiven me. He had all along I think. Thank you for all your concerns and words of encouragement. All my love, Jeffrey |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Back to the top for Chris |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Oh wow Jeff...this was wrenching, but beautiful nonetheless...I know he's proud of you sir. Anyone would be - I'm sure it feels good to finally finish it. I am so sorry to hear about your story though, I can't even begin to imagine the pain you've carried now all this time. I'm not sure I would have been able to be so strong. I have one best friend, and she means the world to me - I would die if I lost her. Keep your chin up, and continue to write, as writing helps the soul heal....Love you! Gennifer |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jeffrey~ Your poem had the poignancy to it even before I read your reply explaining the cause of the loss. My friend, you have carried your burden in a loving heart. Now comes the peace of knowing that Robert sent you his message of love ... in his forgiveness. Yes, the experience of knowing another's spirit has reached out to touch us has been shared by this lady. A beautiful tribute that you shared. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Gen, Thank you for taking the time to read this piece of my heart. It has not been easy to live with. I know I'll never completely get over this pain, but it has gotten a little easier to bury it in my mind. Marge, I know that I will one day see Chris again. It's just a matter of time. Glad to hear someone else has experienced the feeling of being touched by someone's spirit. I thought maybe I was losing it...lol All my love, Jeffrey |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
bttp cuz i can...lol |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
bttt for Marie66 |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Jeffrey, this is a beautiful tribute to your friend, and I know that you two will be together again someday. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
I am swept away in the feeling that you have brought with your words of love for a lost friend. My heart cries at your lost. Lovely poem Jeff A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I'm deeply touched by your poem, Jeffrey. It must have been so hard for you to release your feelings...and to undo your feelings of guilt...Hugs! Time brings wisdom. |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Found it, Jeffrey~ You already know I think this is beautiful~ Marie~ |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
First I would like to say that I feel better than I have in years to finally share this pain with someone. It is like a swwet release. Lovebug....We are always together for he will always be in my heart. First Knight, Thank you  Martie, Thank you and yes it feels very good to release the pain. Time truly does bring wisdom. Marie, Thank you dear for listening to my ramblings. You are a special friend. Love to all of you, Jeffrey |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Jeffrey - I'm sure Chris will be very proud to call you his friend - and even though he is with God now, I'm sure he is watching over you and guiding you along life's pathway. Your poem was beautifully written with love. Roniece xx |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touching |
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