Open Poetry #7 |
The Ultimate Sacrifice...........Was JESUS |
WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
The ultimate sacrifice I can think of Is what they did to our Savior, Jesus How they split his skin with whips As He stood and endured the pain All for His children, children like you To save us all from ourselves. Who carried the burden of the cross Our crosses, our burdens, our sins All because the love He holds for each He endured it when they spit into His face And pushed Him to the ground, and blasphemed His name Believing not that He was sent from God. He endured each heart-rending nail That pierced into his wrists And tore into the feet of peace Thorns that were sunk deep into the head Of one who endured because of love. One who was placed upon a cross And hung until his very bones Were out of their joints And the lungs caved in And He endured suffocation. But even though he hung there, He still had the strength to teach And say, God forgive them For they know not what they do. But He is an overcomer, for He has RISEN! [This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 04-23-2000).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this was so beautiful, maybe I'll go to church tomorrow after all!!! Kathleen |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Yes....beautifully done, Becky.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, WhiteDove~ How vividly true. How blessed is the rememberance of what He gave for us. God the Father we thank you. Jesus, King of Kings we thank you. He is risen ! Glory be His name. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I changed the title for those whom might be upset by it. Irish, Devine and Marge God bless you all and thank you much! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Another Beautiful poem Angel... you go girl!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
A beautiful poem, Dove .... |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
Nice, and well thought out. I am not a Jesus follower, but I can understand your feelings in this one. Good job. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
DA, Pepper thank you! God bless! Brandon then that is a compliment indeed! Thank you! |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Such a beautiful description of the greatest Easter gift of all! Happy Easter! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I wouldn't expect any less of you.....and you never disappoint. Wonderful work, dovey. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Amen! This says it all, Rebecca! Denise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful WhtDove...Yes it was the Ultimate Sacrifice...it took all of his strength and all of his courage and all of his love and of course total trust in his Heavenly Father to pay this price for all of us...I do Love him and all my hope is with him. James |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Love Bug Happy Easter to you too! Thanks much Balladeer! I'm sure I disappoint, but thank you for such a wonderful comment! Thank you Denise, I hope so! James it sure did! If only we could be so dependant. I'm glad to hear your trust is with Him, no better place to put it! |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Oh, incredible work, Whtdove. God Bless you. *Krista Knutson* As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins. ~*Albert Schweitzer*~ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Bowing my head in thanks Krista! God bless you too sweetie! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
(sniff) yuh i love HIM |
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