Softness, Sweetness and Ecstasy

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Open Poetry #7

Softness, Sweetness and Ecstasy

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2000-06-10 04:43 PM

I wrote this on a napkin for a waitress friend of mine when I was eating breakfast the other day. I gave it to her and she said it made her day. Don't worry, Lena is the woman I Love.

Softness, Sweetness, and Ecstasy

Maria I can't keep my eyes off of you.
Your beauty softly caresses me as early morning dew.
How could any lover hesitate
to kiss your lips
to touch your gentle fingertips.
An evening in the moonlight with you would be softness, sweetness and ecstasy.

June10,2000

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

1 posted 2000-06-10 04:58 PM

this is SO sweet! i am sure this made
your friends day! it would make mine.
you big teddy bear you lol.
take care.
amy

"Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2000-06-10 08:08 PM

What a lucky lady, and what a thoughtful man! You must have made her day! Well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2000-06-11 08:14 PM

Thank you Amy and Kit for your wonderful response. James

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

4 posted 2000-06-12 11:46 AM

This piece is nice, short, and sweet! Loved it!

Nathan

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2000-06-15 07:10 PM

Thank you Nate I appreciate your wonderful comments. James

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