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Heart Strings. Sven's poetic joust challenege
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Heart Strings. Sven's poetic joust challenege |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland 
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Wrapped in the love of you, Hands lingering on your skin Seeking refuge refusing to break their hold. "Everlasting love" you whispered I believe this, breathe this but I am so frightened to let go. In your absence I return to that darkened room Where you were conceived as a survival dream to keep my hopes alive, to warm my heart from stone. Drowning in your lips, you suck me deeper in I am blind to the world, fragile angel in your palms yours to cherish and pleasure extract and tenderly nurture. Wrapped in arms of you, lulled to sleep by the beating whispers of your heart. Kiss your breast celebrate the hollow joy of flesh, with you its meaningless flowers bliss. Valentine oh Valentine never have I been naked defenceless a doll of porcelain to be cherished or crushed, stroking singing songs sorrow sways she's salvation. Wrapped in your heart strings, wrapped in your flesh, your love your soul. My shoulders once cold, inside once empty my heart once lonely in you these tragedies subside. Breathless and alive in you, dreaming for this to birth in reality. ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany Culture, alienation, boredom and despair" "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Ahhhhhhhhh********* My poor little heart can't take much more of this!!! What a beauty of a love weave!! Especially loved the defenceless a doll of porcelain to be cherished or crushed, What a line!!!! Bravo Brian!! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I am blind to the world, fragile angel in your palms yours to cherish and pleasure extract and tenderly nurture... Wrapped in arms of you, lulled to sleep by the beating whispers of your heart... Valentine oh Valentine never have I been naked defenceless a doll of porcelain to be cherished or crushed... Wrapped in your heart strings, wrapped in your flesh, your love your soul.These were my favorite lines...  WOW Brian go read some more and watch those movies! Beautiful display of love...wow!  [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 06-10-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Wrapped in the love of you, Hands lingering on your skin Seeking refuge refusing to break their hold. "Everlasting love" you whispered I believe this, breathe this but I am so frightened to let go. In your absence I return to that darkened room Where you were conceived as a survival dream to keep my hopes alive, to warm my heart from stone. Drowning in your lips, you suck me deeper in I am blind to the world, fragile angel in your palms yours to cherish and pleasure extract and tenderly nurture. --------------- wow Bri...WOW... you got ole Eve gator here all dewey eyed and smiling with this. I ADORE when you write like this... so does the cherub this is beautiful my sweet poet friend and perfect with your unique style. very nice Bri-gator love ya when your making us swoon *smile* later romance gator EVE I think I could need - this in my life I think I'm just scared - that I know too much I can't relate and that's a problem I'm feeling ... If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home There's an awful lot of breathing room But I can hardly move If you're gone - baby you need to come home cuz there's a little bit of something me... In everything in you. ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Many deep heavy sighs ... so many lines are my favorites here ... feeling a little light-headed after this read. Beautifully written and incredible sentiments displayed ... I loved this Brian! Best wishes, /Kit |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
OOOoooohhh...feel like I was there...(serenity blowing smoke rings...) Luscious. Lovely. Beautiful brian... (serenity wishes encore....) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sir Brian of Madden thou hast indeed penned a song Inspired by Meg Ryan movies, each just 2 hours long, Sleepless in Seattle with it's cross-country magic And You've Got Mail with it's Internet addicts. Thy weapon of choice here was technically superior A VCR! Making our lances inferior!! But thou has written such a poem so tender, That it shall remain here so that all may enjoy this render. ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Butterflies_dont_cry.... Well it was about time I exposed my sensitive side. Thank you for your wonderful response. A Romantic Heart...oh I could not watch any more of those Meg Ryan movies lol,thank you for your wonderful reply. Jan, if it pleases you and the cherub then I am happy. "love ya when your making us swoon," how knows the love ballads might be next, thanks for your kind words. Kit thank you for your lovely reply. Serenity...encores... I don't know...I always prefer to leave them wanting more (that sounded bad, good thing we are not in adult. Too many connotations lol). thanks your wonderful reply. Sven, thank you for your response in verse it was wonderful, curing my poetry thirst. It is not easy watching those meg ryan things they make you cry and pull hard on your heart strings, this the price for art, the pain to write verse. I shall thank you for your wonderful and funny response and leave because this rhyming is such a curse < !signature--> ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany Culture, alienation, boredom and despair" "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. [This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 06-10-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Beauty percieved, personified, Love with no strings attached.... What lines doth thou pen, Brave Knight Brian? LOL , been reading too much of Sir Sven's words and but great lines here...... Valentine oh Valentine never have I been naked defenceless a doll of porcelain to be cherished or crushed, stroking singing songs sorrow sways she's salvation. Wrapped in your heart strings, wrapped in your flesh, your love your soul. My shoulders once cold, inside once empty my heart once lonely in you these tragedies subside. Breathless and alive in you, dreaming for this to birth in reality. ..... Much enjoyed this work from you... sudhir. My heart is pounding, my stomach's inside out I'm feeling kind-a-shaky, my mind is full of doubt All I ever think about, is fearing fear itself, Wish I could unscrew my head and put it on the shelf Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Don't know what I'm looking at, the lights are all too bright My brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor Sweep 'em up. Throw 'em away, don't want 'em anymore Clouds race across the sky, day turns into night, Still there are the questions, no answers in sight Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Starin' out the window, everything is just too bright Brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor, Wish I could unscrew my head, and kick it out the door... You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange ~ Strange ~ Joe Satriani (Flying in a Blue Dream) |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Brian, amazing I bow to a master.... the pen is indeed mightier than the sword. Shame that thou should use a weapon so fierce, to defeat the mightiest foe, and woo the fairest maiden. Bravo. Parker |
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