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Simple Sonnet
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Simple Sonnet |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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How dangerous to wish the world "begone..." as if by stroke of hand. All my hope, my dreams unfurled-- remorselessness be a strange land. A simple sonnet, do I seek, as I war constrains of rhyme. Words I write fight words I speak, beating heart, but passing time... Explanations? I have none. But to know you, soul afire, again, again, 'til morning come... Unburied. I've been long expired. Gracious, I'll accept defeat-- Surrendered, grateful, at your feet. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
WOW! Love this... awesome stuff...  K |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
look its Kam...my butterfly slippers icon sharer  --------------- well this is WAY more than me muse can take... she just walked out the door fuming with MAJOR poet envy... i wanna write a sonnet!! *twin stomping her feet in tantrum* *smile* oooooohhhhh i looooove this >>But to know you, soul afire, again, again, 'til morning come... Unburied. I've been long expired. Gracious, I'll accept defeat-- Surrendered, grateful, at your feet.<< you just need to be kissed for this one... me gots new chapstick too LOL hehe...(do ya think they know were teasing) *sigh* got your E- i'll E back later... me thinks sleep will cost extra tonite... I KNOW--YOU KNOW :\ *kiss kiss* later sweet twin gator |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
...thank you much Severn, & Janet Marie my gratitude as always..... Much love to ya both... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A simple sonnet, you say serenity, I shout back, A WONDERFUL SONNET, How I wish I could sonnets too...even if I write good poems I will be happy, but such exquisite sonnets, woe begone is me, this seems way beyond me... Regards, sudhir My heart is pounding, my stomach's inside out I'm feeling kind-a-shaky, my mind is full of doubt All I ever think about, is fearing fear itself, Wish I could unscrew my head and put it on the shelf Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Don't know what I'm looking at, the lights are all too bright My brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor Sweep 'em up. Throw 'em away, don't want 'em anymore Clouds race across the sky, day turns into night, Still there are the questions, no answers in sight Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Starin' out the window, everything is just too bright Brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor, Wish I could unscrew my head, and kick it out the door... You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange ~ Strange ~ Joe Satriani (Flying in a Blue Dream) |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
serenity, to kiss the hand of this maiden fair, whose words have stirred a heart from dispair. I bow to you sweet and fair maiden. Parker |
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