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Essance of Woman (SVEN'S CHALLENGE WINNER :)
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Essance of Woman (SVEN'S CHALLENGE WINNER :) |
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gabe_reiser New Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 8Reston, VA, USofA |
I totally got this one  eat this Sven A woman's face with nature's own hand painted, Hast thou the master mistress of my passion, A woman's gentle heart but not aquainted With shifting change as is false woman's fashion, An eye more bright than theirs, less false in rolling, Gilding the object whereupon it gazeth, A man in hue all hues in his controlling, Which steals men's eyes and woman's souls amazeth. And for a woman wert thou first created, Till nature as she wrought thee fell a-doting, And by addition me of thee defeated, By adding one thing to my purpose nothing. But since she pricked thee out for woman's pleasure, Mine be thy love and thy love's use their treasure. I WIN! I WIN! lolif i don't win it was surely a rightous effort on my behalf. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
GUARDS!!! GUARDS!!! Remove this "pretender" from the field!! He dares think that the rest of us will yield? He thinks that all it takes is some nerve To win this joust of Knights? He will see that it takes more than that to win Remove him now, never to be heard from again!! gabe_reiser, thou hast insulted this enlightened group of Knights with thy brazen taunts!! This is to be a fight to the finish, one that thou will see from thy dungeon cell!!! GUARDS!!!! GUARDS!!!!!! (Great poem by the way!!! LOL) -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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gabe_reiser New Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 8Reston, VA, USofA |
Sir Sven, bring the real challenge on for this is tiresome. Get your best knight and I will destroy him to kingdom-come. For I will stand on the pedistle for the winner. And by no means I am not a beginner. Ley thy armor on the field for armor is a ban. I will fight till I am the standing last man. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sitting 'neath the shady tree I watch the joust with such glee these silly men, pens erected seeking hearts to be connected. good poem, milord! |
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gabe_reiser New Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 8Reston, VA, USofA |
Poet DeVine, I am glad you liked it. Sir Sven, I may be new in town but I have always won a challenge and never lost, For this challenge dost. Prove our skills in poetry but not with pens. I write it as it comes and without the presence of hens. For I am a true poet, one who writith from thy soul and mind. Thee will not sit in thy dungeon at all. Thou will try and try to get thee to bind. But thou best be prepared for a brawl. |
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Menage Numero Trois Junior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 33Zee South of France |
Hark zee words of the terrifying trio, quell these bold jests sir and put your pen where your ego is and fight in passioned sonnet, not over-bold statements of might! I am zee 3 of three! And are here to be causing zee turmoil of zee Knights! I play only in fun so be sure sir Knight that I speak only from my mouth's side!  < !signature--> vous pouvez penser que vous me connaissez mais vous faites? Je ne suis pas qui vous vous attendez à ce que je soit [This message has been edited by Menage Numero Trois (edited 06-10-2000).] |
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