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Janet Marie
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0 posted 2000-06-09 09:27 PM



a woman wants a man who will make her laugh ...
then hold her when she cries...
she wants a man who will look at her ...
with that special look of I want you--in his eyes...

kisses so hard that she goes weak in the knees...
caresses so gentle that she sighs the word please...


WHOS NEXT>>>>>
ping>>>>>>.



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Martie
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1 posted 2000-06-09 09:43 PM


A woman wants a man
who will listen to her cry
and then take the time
to stay and dry her eyes.
A woman wants such tenderness
to show when you see her
that there will be no question
'bout the feelings that she stirs.

Pong

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2000-06-09 09:46 PM


What a woman needs is romance,
Wine and dance,
True words spoken of "I LOve You",
Honesty and truth, committment to "I DO!"
To be honored and treasured,
Not measured,
Loved for her heart, her soul,
Her mind, the beauty of intellect it holds,
What a woman wants,
True, passionate desire,
desire that makes her heart melt,
Melting all over her,
Like lotion in his hand,
What a woman wants is respect,
Deep conversation, not haveing to be perfect,
To be cherished, as the woman he would give his life,
To be a friend, a companion, she being his wife,

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
3 posted 2000-06-09 09:52 PM


This woman wants a man
That knows how to do dishes
He knows how to say YES Ma'am
And begs to do my wishes

He massages my back
Get's my bubble bath ready
The laundry he'll stack
His massage hands are steady

Ping  

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
4 posted 2000-06-09 10:06 PM


A woman wants a man
Who is bold and romantic
To sweep her off her feet
When things get frantic

A man who is honest
And hard working too
One who she feels
Is special and true

Women want to be treasured
Above all other things
Someone very rare
To share a wedding ring

This is just a peek
At what women desire
The challenge to all men
Is to light the fire!!



 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Tennessee Angel
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since 2000-06-03
Posts 661
Tennessee
5 posted 2000-06-09 10:09 PM


A woman wants a man
Who laughs with ease.
One who will stand by her side
but yet know when to leave.

A woman wants a man
who calls her sugar plum and honey.
Let's be for real...A woman wants a man
who has a lot of money...

Pong!

 "That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca

Little_Spyro
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since 2000-01-09
Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA
6 posted 2000-06-09 10:14 PM


It's difficult to say from a guy's point of view,
But I'll make an attempt to be somewhat true!

I think a woman would like a big smile,
Friendly, perpetual, lasting a while;
I think that she also would like some care
In times of need, everywhen, everywhere;
I think she'd like comfort when she's a wreck...
Or maybe, for shopping, a rather large check? (   Just kidding!)

Perhaps she would care for a guy who's not quite
Society's mirror, but be still just and right
To whom he would care for, whom he'd caress;
Is this the secret to social success?


Little Spyro T. Dragon


[This message has been edited by Little_Spyro (edited 06-09-2000).]

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
7 posted 2000-06-09 10:34 PM


A woman wants a man who is true
Someone who will hold her in the night
A woman wants a man who does what he says he'll do
Romance is what women want, someone to keep the fire burning bright
A woman wants a man who isn't afraid to cry
Who can be himself, and honest too
Who writes sweet letters and makes her sigh
But what women want MOST is a man who can say and mean "I love you".
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 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."







[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 06-09-2000).]

Holly
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since 2000-05-12
Posts 127
Arkansas
8 posted 2000-06-09 10:36 PM


a woman wants a man that has kisses more intoxicating than wine...
a man that wants to feel their hearts intertwine

a woman wants to have sweet things whispered in her ear...
to feel completely adored from afar and near

a woman wants a man to show her passionate things in life...
a man that also knows how to be sensitive when there is strife


Where do I find this kind of man???? LOL
Who's next???  


 I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of.
Michel de Montaigne

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
9 posted 2000-06-09 10:49 PM


A women wants to be admired,
To be loved for who she is,
Not who you want her to be,
To be encouraged and inspired,
To say I am sorry when needed,
To help her when she is tired,
A woman wants to feel important,
to feel wanted and understood,
Just listen to her heart,
Listen without speaking,
Be the friend you should,
Don't make sarcastic remarks,
Arguements are not a game,
But a learning growing time,
Time to let go of our pride and shame,
Be the support, the listener,
Just treat her everyday,
the way,
You would treat a stranger,
with respect, and manners,
always putting her first,
Loving a woman this way is better,
This way will never turn into worse,



Alwye
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In the space between moments
10 posted 2000-06-09 11:04 PM


A woman wants a man to share her world
To dry her tears when all is unfurled
She wants to be kissed as if it was the first
And wants him to look at her with desire's thirst.

She wants to be touched as if she were an angel
But treated as being simply equal
A woman wants to be loved for eternity
And with her man always be!

Or at least that's what most of us want, I think!  Great work gals (and guys, I can agree with it all!  


 *Krista Knutson*

"Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~



Marina
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario
11 posted 2000-06-09 11:13 PM


A women wants
A kiss that turns her inside out
to know she is the one
to believe beyond a doubt

He is the marrow in her bones
the blood that pulses through heart
That kiss that says everything
To know, they will never part

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
12 posted 2000-06-09 11:20 PM


A Woman wants to feel special,
Appreciated as a lady, and lover,
not just another, one night stand,
She wants a man, a real man,
With real words, heartfelt full of meaning,
Someone she can depend on,
A man who is full of spontaneous fun,
Full of surprises of picnics in the park,
A walk late night holding hands in the dark,
Little notes left throughout the day,
Just a another way to say,
I am still in love with you,
You are my forever,
Forever and true,
A woman wants a balance of a strong,
but sensitive heart,
One who feels her pain,
Who is her souls other part,
A woman wants a man who wants to take care of her,
Make her feel safe and secure,
One who is open with his heart and feelings,
Sharing all of himself completely,
A good father, who loves his children as deeply,
A compassionate man who would help others,
As if they were his own flesh and blood,
Or a sister or brother,
A giving kind, loving kind,
Not boastful, arrogant, or the hollywood type,
a peacemaker, bold protector, comforter,
without a grouchy hype,
The measure of a man is whats inside his heart!


[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 06-09-2000).]

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

13 posted 2000-06-09 11:24 PM


candle light dinners
picnics in the park
close slow dancing
long slow kisses in the dark

holding hands
nibbles on ears
hold her close
brush away her tears

hugs just because
roses for no reason
promises kept
love to last all the seasons

A POET TO WRITE HER A LOVELY RHYME
A POET WHO WILL STAY WITH HER FOR ALL TIME
A POET TO COMPOSE HER A CHERISHED VERSE
A POET WHO WILL BE HER HEART'S SWEETEST CURSE

(do ya think the guys are sweating yet)  

GOTTA LOVE A POET !!!

netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
14 posted 2000-06-09 11:33 PM


A woman wants a man to stand at her side
With such a look of pride in his eyes

A woman wants a man who understands PMS
and doesn't get mad when she is stressed

A woman wants a man who hugs everyday
who once in awhile tells his friends to go away

A woman wants a man to make love to her
like she is the only woman in the world

A woman wants to be protected
but never stopped and suffocated

~netswan

PONG

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
15 posted 2000-06-09 11:34 PM


A few more thoughts........ya didn't think I was through???

A man who can clean
and make the floors gleam

A man that can dance all night
like gleaming angles in flight

A man that takes as well as he gives
and who loves me as long as he lives

A man that accepts my help in life
to walk beside in joy and strife

A man who'll dance in the Rain
and drive in the fast lane

A man that eats with a closed mouth
and when it's cold he doesn't head south

Is there a man with all this and more?
If so I'll unlock my front door!!



netswan
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Posts 1369
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16 posted 2000-06-09 11:36 PM


LOL Butterfly, of course there is. Here is the key!

A woman wants a man that is not afraid to cry
But is brave enough to do or die!

~netswan

Marina
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario
17 posted 2000-06-09 11:47 PM


Oh Jan......You know we have got these boys more then sweating!!!!!!  they can't handle the competion!!!!

Marina

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
18 posted 2000-06-09 11:56 PM


A woman wants to be loved for her mistakes,
A man who can give and take,
Devotion real not pretend or fake,
A man to feed her when she is sick,
Run bath water with candles is the trick,
One who will buy tampons in the store,
compliment her talents and much more,
Cook her dinner once in awhile,
One who has taste and style,
Not perfection,
But one who can make that love connection! hehe!

Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
19 posted 2000-06-10 12:00 PM


A woman wants a man of surrender,
To our passionate whispers
TO our love that transcends
within their hearts
A look that says that they can't get enough
A best friend and lover.
Someone to tell my deepest thoughts to.
A woman wants lust to be apparent
even if he's to tired.
To be loved from head to toe
letting us know were loved
To share in the chores of everyday life,
That so often drain us
and cause us to bite!
Most of all though, a woman
wants a man to be willing to jump at
her every whim
Hey couldn't resist
Just say we're kind of like folgers
we want to be filled to the brim.
Of course then theres always the second
cup.


 

gemini shadow
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 70
the mystic
20 posted 2000-06-10 12:04 PM


a man to set my lips on fire
a man whose touch is pure desire
a man to make me sigh and swoon
a man who'll give me the stars and moon
a man who will sing me a sweet serenade
a man who hold my heart and my love never trade
a man who will kiss me from head to toe
and then he can kiss--  WELL YOU KNOW!!  

(oh be quiet marina....she was good for MOST of the poem) LOL  

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

21 posted 2000-06-10 12:13 PM


I want nothing less than perfect trust.
The meet of eyes in understanding--
smiles to share a joke in blush--
fingers yearn a hand in holding,
comfortable in silent hush.

The feeling met, that when he's there
my missing half that I'm aware...
to give myself without diminish--
I speak--he finishes my sentence.

The excitement knowing that therein,
is no beginning and no end.
To have my passion be my friend,
with he in me, and I in him.

netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
22 posted 2000-06-10 12:27 PM


Well Men, who are reading
as you can see each woman is as
different as can be

I want a man who tries to understand me
And who is as passionate as can be

I want a man who will admit his mistakes
and forgive mine when a confession I make

I want a man who knows a woman like me
and never stops her from being all she can be


PING PONG  -- you woman are doing a wonderful
job, such wonderful poetry up above mine that
is LOL

Little_Spyro
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since 2000-01-09
Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA
23 posted 2000-06-10 06:35 AM


Well, I'm not sweating yet...these are all the things I'm trying to give to my girlfriend, and she seems to be happy with my job of keeping her happy...so I think I'm doing something right!  


Little Spyro T. Dragon

nando
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since 2000-06-09
Posts 87
Vaxjo, Smaland, Sweden
24 posted 2000-06-10 06:49 AM


"A woman wants a man who can make her darkness bright.
A man who writes her poetry and fills her with delight.
She wants a man of wisdom, she wants a man of love.
You´ve guessed by now? the poets here is who I´m thinking of..."

-nando-


 Ask me how to live your life, and this to you I´ll say: make your choises true and wise, so that when tomorrow will arise, you´ll smile at yesterday...

LngJhnAg
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Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
25 posted 2000-06-10 08:23 AM


Please forgive me ladies because I've been so late,
In responding to this thread and making all you wait.
I've read each well written verse, and now I understand,
The traits women want most of all when they think of men.

So with this new found knowledge, I can speak for each man here,
For once I was a blind man, and now I see so clear.
So sit back men, I'll speak for you when I say I comprehend,
Everything the girls said here about what it takes to be a man.

A woman wants a man to be there when she needs to cry,
But she wants to cry alone, and not to be asked, "Why?"
A woman wants a man to say, "It's going to be alright,
"I'll fix those problems for you dear.  See? There's no need to cry."

She wants a man to listen while she villifies and vents,
And then respond to her silly anger with flowery compliments.
She wants a man to be the silent type, and talk to her all night,
And tell her whenever she's really wrong, that she's really right.

A woman wants a man who'll dance beneathe the moon and stars,
But only to his favorite songs about 18-wheelers and cars.
She wants a man who laughs out loud and plays the loutish fool,
A man who won't hold her hand when he thinks it isn't cool.

A woman wants a real brave man who can, with fearless smile,
Walk with his head held high down the Feminine Products aisle.
A man who knows it isn't safe to look in a woman's purse,
During those "special" times when she has the curse.

A woman wants a man who'll let her serve his every need,
Someone to sit by meekly while he surfs on his TV.
For serving men is what women do when they want to be fulfilled.
It isn't much, I realize now, but it makes them thrilled.

So, thank you ladies for teaching me what it takes to be a man,
I thought you'd say romantic things are what you understand.
What's that you say?  I didn't hear a single word you said?
Of course I did, little girls, its all inside you heads.

Now you just go run along and talk of babies and clothing sales,
While we men continue to serve your needs, and fix whatever ails.
We will take good care of you while you wait on us day and night,
After all, you are our women, and it is our right.


What???  There were lots of explanantions??  And now Lorelei is gonna hear about this???  Just a minute, ladies - let's not be rash and do something foolish here.  Think about this a little more.  There's no need to tell Lorelei ... she's a good girl and doesn't need to worry her little head about this silly poem... now does she???  Good girls..  whew... for a minute there I thought these gals were gonna tell Lorelei.  I gotta be more careful about who I stir up around here  

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
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26 posted 2000-06-10 08:27 AM



Me thinks a rolling pin aside the head!!

LOL     

P.S. I'm Tellllllllllllllling!!!  

[This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 06-10-2000).]

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
27 posted 2000-06-10 08:51 AM


LJA, for all of your winning ways in wooing the woman of your heart, you forgot one thing...

a woman wants a man
who remembers simply
the simplicity of a
hug

for when there is nothing
left to give, but welcome arms,
loving kiss,
a hug is simple,
and simply,
bliss.

HUGS, LJA! Now, go share one with your lady!

 Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~


Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

28 posted 2000-06-10 08:53 AM


OH LORELEI...DEAR SWEET LORELEI...
HE GOT OUT OF HIS PLAY PEN AGAIN...
ME THINKS HE NEEDS A GOOD SPANKING
(EXCEPT HE WILL ENJOY THAT TOO MUCH)

LJ you scallywag...



Lorelei54
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 458

29 posted 2000-06-10 11:05 AM


This woman wants a man
Who will cherish her and only her
Who will lay by her side at night.
This woman wants a man
Who will share his space with her
And gaze into her eyes
And share his soul.
This woman wants a man
Who will open her doors
And wash the dishes
And tell her
"I want your life to be pure heaven"
and he does...
This woman wants a man
Who will make sweet love to her at night
And keep coming back for more.
This woman wants...
The man she lives with and adores!!!

OK!!! gals..he may play here,
Bt I know where he lives!!!

lorilockheart
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 206
Alabama
30 posted 2000-06-10 11:13 AM


Let me tell you that I heard a rumor.
A woman wants a man with a good sense of humor.
Laughter is what she needs throughout her days.
By your funny words she wants to be amazed.

A woman wants the "new love" feeling to stay.
And passion's spark to never go away.
She wants to be your equal and yet this is true,
She also wants to be protected by you.

A woman wants a man to know
Both ends of the spectrum help her grow.
She needs a life and love that is whole.
And wants you to really know her true soul.

 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
31 posted 2000-06-10 11:13 AM


I *sigh* dear maidens of passions,
by all your wants, desires and fashions...

Thats why, methinks women are difficult...now I am enlightened more...

...and all I wanted was a woman with love and compassion...when will my time come?

LOL, you ladies are all geniuses sitting and gifting away these wonderful words for rustics like me to see...

Regards to all of you, and lots of love...
Sudhir.

P.S. sorry to use up your space, but couldn't help curiousity see the other way...

 My heart is pounding, my stomach's inside out
I'm feeling kind-a-shaky, my mind is full of doubt
All I ever think about, is fearing fear itself,
Wish I could unscrew my head and put it on the shelf
Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight,
Don't know what I'm looking at, the lights are all too bright
My brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor
Sweep 'em up. Throw 'em away, don't want 'em anymore
Clouds race across the sky, day turns into night,
Still there are the questions, no answers in sight
Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight,
Starin' out the window, everything is just too bright
Brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor,
Wish I could unscrew my head, and kick it out the door...
You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange
You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange

~ Strange ~ Joe Satriani (Flying in a Blue Dream)

Sven
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32 posted 2000-06-10 11:42 AM


Gentle Ladies of Passions
Poets and Maides, Passionate Women all
Women of power and of light
Women that can make any Knight's night (!)
Thank you for your words kind and true
They were as delightful as each of you.

The answer, as so earlier pointed out
Is that each woman is as different as she is the same
At times Delicate and gentle, like falling rain
At other times, powerful and forceful, like a hurricane
Someone to care for and have care back
To help us with the things that we lack.

So, Brave Knights, take these words to heart
As you work on perfecting your art
That although women may be different, they are indeed the same
They only wish to be loved, hearing you speak their name. . .

------------------------------------------------------




 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
33 posted 2000-06-10 12:01 PM


Oh Sven is wise to the ways of women I see
But give us but a moment and you'll see
Today you may be confident our wants you'll find
Tomorrow my dear's we just may change our mind  


[This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 06-10-2000).]

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