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The Dreamer |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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The Dreamer < !signature-->Today and now I come to you ~ simply me, open view, a person who, [in common] speak is probably one, of common, weak. I write because words come to me open end, sweet fantasy, true life, ah! they live in dreams! only life is what it seems. To BE, a poet, a writer, of dream to be complete, or perhaps it seems I dream too much, I am complete? Oh dream of mine, I ask REPEAT! ©KRJ 9 June 2000 Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 06-09-2000).] |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Love this! Love this! |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
so unique and with a flair it often seems like such a dare, but a poet has a dream so often one can not touch except the poet that dreams this dream. That is why we each or rare we happened upon this dream of our very own. To dream and write is so contrite so we must write to remember of what we dreamed. very nice poem with so much meaning. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
A wonderful poem. I dream too much......you can never dream too much Sunshine believe me I am a professional dreamer. After it is when our thoughts wander that we see magical images that we can translate into poetry. I dream too much, I am complete? Oh dream of mine, I ask REPEAT! Hopeful your dream will become a reality. wonderful poem. ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany Culture, alienation, boredom and despair" "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you all for the interesting replies, but Brian, a "professional dreamer?" How do you become one, let me know, because I think I can apply for the position! Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
To dream for a poet is to live and breathe...what a beautiful weave!! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I absolutely LOVED this Sunshine! I relate pretty closely on this one ... dream on dear poet ... wonderful verse, just loved it! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Butterflies and Kit, thank you so much for making so many of my dreams come through with your comments, and inspirations... Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Karilea, thou art but the sunshine of a dreamy heart... thou art is but that of a grand poetess, writing of dreams, dreamt through dreamy eyes... Keep dreaming, Enjoy the dreams, and take care. - sudhir |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sudhir, I enjoy your comments very, very much...they add great joy to my days... Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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