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The Puddles Embrace
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The Puddles Embrace |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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You a single drop of rain fall from the sky down at my feet and you speak to me in ripples, of small waves but whispers, stir the rainwater of you and puddles embrace you with promises but promises are colourless, transparent can you not see ? how they will turn to clay Angel of Darkness 10/6/00 < !signature--> Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 06-09-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wow! Very good..imagery here is terrific. But 'what's rain'?  |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Oh this is like rain the the darkness.......Hardly seen.......but felt so deep there is nothing but the rain.. Well done It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Maree I love your imagery here too. I love the last verse....turning to clay and transparency....great lines! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Your poetry has grown from strength to strength to hon. And I know where you are speaking from my friend. Hugs K |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Gorgeous, Dark Angel....I love the imagery. A truly beautiful poem indeed.  *Krista Knutson* "Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ Your writing is awesome. I especially like this one. It is softly rippling ... it speaks quietly of 'the puddle's embrace'. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
What a read! Here I thought puddles were shallow little things....you have shown me otherwise!! Thank you for sharing this! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Rain is a topic I dearly love to attempt to write of, but puddles, oh you have captured the imagination in this one!!! Kathleen "How do I love thee? Let me count the ways. I love thee to the depth and breadth and height My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight For the ends of Being and ideal Grace." Elizabeth Barrett Browning |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you Sharon no rain out your way hey?First_Knight, thank you so much Thanks Angel, glad you liked Kamla thanks for your lovely reply my Dear Glad you know where I'm speaking from Krista, thanks so much hon Marge you are very kind with your replies to my poetry, I thank you. Glad you enjoyed BDC, I guess it depends on which way you look at them thank you so much. Irish Rose Thanks so much Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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