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DestinysCharm Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 90 |
Ripe and Ready We slow dance below the brightest crystal ball, two people destined and yet afraid. Your eyes longing to ravage all of me, my mind spinning losing all control. Your words tingle as you whisper sweetly, my rising awareness seeks comfort. Your soft lips playfully kissing my neck, my inner sensations soaring in flight. Your hands gently touching, exploring, my passion exploding like fireworks. Your body ripe, and ready for picking, my whole self ready for your harvest. |
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nando Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 87Vaxjo, Smaland, Sweden |
DestinysCharm... You´ve really captured the passion here... A beautiful poem that makes you think about the times when nothing else really matters but the one you love and want with all your body and soul.... Loved it  -nando- Ask me how to live your life, and this to you I´ll say: make your choises true and wise, so that when tomorrow will arise, you´ll smile at yesterday... |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Destiny.. a wonderful poem. beautiful images filled with passion Your body ripe, and ready for picking, my whole self ready for your harvest. ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany Culture, alienation, boredom and despair" "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. |
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Justin Nuendo Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 86Ozzz |
Ahum.....wrong personality  [This message has been edited by Justin Nuendo (edited 06-09-2000).] |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Oh my.....Ready for the Harvest........My dear who might be the farmer? LOL This is very lovely It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
What a wonderful and passionate poem ! Love it ! |
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DestinysCharm Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 90 |
nando, Thanks for your delightful reply. Brian, Thank you very much, glad you enjoyed. Justin, Thanks for stopping by. First_Knight, Thanks for reading, and replying, glad you enjoyed it. Only I know the farmer. ~smiles~ Munda, Wow, you love it, thank you very much. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Destiny~ Very, very nicely said. Enjoyed the read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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DestinysCharm Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 90 |
Marge, Thanks for reading and your kind reply, I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
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