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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
A girl so empty and all alone Waiting for you to call from a pay-phone I paged you and paged you where did you go? I really need to talk to you- your feelings I need to know I'm lost inside of confusion bay My tears flow down on this sorrowful day My heart an immense lump of stone Why did you leave me?--Leave me all alone The phone rings!-is it you?? NO, just some guy selling super glue. You now have her, you don't need me So I am the one who pays the fee I should've known before I fell in love That she's the one who fits the glove Did your kind words mean anything Or was it meant to just be a fling? PLease be honest and tell me how you feel To yourself and even to me, please be real. ~*~Dedicated to Chris who leaves me alone in a sea of tears swept by confusion~*~ "Love is the product of our discontentment with ourselves." "Bleeding hearts release tears of fire" "work like you don't need money, love like you've never been hurt,and live everyday as if it's your last" |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Jessica, who are you girl and where did you come from? lol. I like your style! this poem is full of raw honesty and sadness. i am sorry that he has left you feeling this way and pray that you are able to overcome this sadness with time. i know it's hard, trust me i know. just believe in you and keep the faith. take care! amy  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is very honest and heartfelt. I hope that the next poem you write for Chris has a happier dial tone. James |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
thanks for your replies guys!! Amy~well he is a jerk and he can kiss my cute little butt. lol j/k.  thanks for your kind words.James~thanks, but the next poem that I wrote for chris (actually was today) is not any happier. last night I found out a lot of stuff and I for sure never want to see or talk to him again. As far as I am concerned he is out of my life FOREVER  which makes me very sad b/c I love him very much, but he has hurt me a lot and I refuse to put up with him any more. thanks for your kind words!!:0 Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi star nice poem and from your poems i see that you're very faithful in your love but he does soemthing really bad...so say that once for all and never look back....you can find some interesting people of your liking...move on.. Sincerely A_L |
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