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Sven's Love Challenge... |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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Forgive me Love for this disgrace The love I feel is just unheard of The way I love makes lovers sort of Appear as lacking love and taste |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
love lacks taste and love.. strange isn't ..i guess its not a disgrace..may be it lacks vivacity..but still there's love..thats not a disgrace.. Sincerely A_L |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Love hath no disgrace, Only abound is grace... Love hath various forms, Maybe yours is just not one of the norms... Master, but you do love many a soul, That serves love's purpose, life's goal. Regards, sudhir... My heart is pounding, my stomach's inside out I'm feeling kind-a-shaky, my mind is full of doubt All I ever think about, is fearing fear itself, Wish I could unscrew my head and put it on the shelf Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Don't know what I'm looking at, the lights are all too bright My brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor Sweep 'em up. Throw 'em away, don't want 'em anymore Clouds race across the sky, day turns into night, Still there are the questions, no answers in sight Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Starin' out the window, everything is just too bright Brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor, Wish I could unscrew my head, and kick it out the door... You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange ~ Strange ~ Joe Satriani (Flying in a Blue Dream) |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
You've missed the point, try to read it again! |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
I'm not too proud to say that I don't get it at all, Master. I really like it...I just don't get it.  "That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
It's quiete simple, Forgive me Love for this disgrace -- the capital "L" suggests that I'm addressing the feeling of love, not just my love but love in general. The love I feel is just unheard of -- self-explanatory The way I love makes lovers sort of Appear as lacking love and taste... -- "Compared to the love I feel, other lovers seem to lack true love... My love disgraces other loves..." My explanation sounds corny, just try to read it over, maybe you'll see what I mean. [This message has been edited by Master (edited 06-09-2000).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Master, this poem indeed shows us your heart. . . and the depth of love that you feel. . . it's an excellent response to the challenge. . . You have done well here Brave Knight. . . well done indeed. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thank you Sven and great challenge! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
I got it, Master, sans explanation. And it says more to me than all the other "who's hot" poems I've read of late here. Also, the fact that you said it so succinctly, a sign of true talent. Corinne |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thank you Corinne, it wasn't too confusing was it? |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
I got it BEFORE I read the other explanations! Great Poem Master! ~Heather |
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