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Your Knight (Sven's Challenge)
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Your Knight (Sven's Challenge) |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678
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"> < !signature--> Your Knight ~First Knight~ Let me be your Knight, That one who holds all that you are. Upon the breeze we will ride to that place, That place that only you and I know. In the meadows I walk with thoughts only of you. I ask, "Where has my mind gone?" You haunt me like shadows that follow the light. My thinking is not free, nor do I want it to be. Let me be all that I am to you, For we have not yet become all that we are. I come to you now in the peace that you give, Willingly I surrender to you, and all that you are. I will gladly rest in your beauty, Sit eager and await your return, For I was made for you, and my heart knows not another. It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone. [This message has been edited by First__Knight (edited 06-09-2000).] |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Beautiful words thy knight has spoken, unto thy heart as loves token, and a painting, beautiful as his words, my heart is listening to what the heart has spoken, But only the soul has heard,  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lovely graphic to accompany the song of your heart. So romantic and sweet. Wonderufl writing!! LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Lovely picture. Hey, she looks just like me, NOT lol This is a tender poem first_knight - Sweet and fragile ~netswan |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
First Knight, gentle Knight, closest to the King, You have shown to us what makes your heart sing. Thy passion you have shown thy love you have revealed You have shown to all of us, the heart behind the shield Superb Gentle Knight. . .thy picture indeed is also beautiful. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Hm..a man that doth surrender is just what this maiden has in mind but if I ride a horse to you won't I get a little behind? Very good sir!! |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Your kindness goes a long way toward this lonely heart...Thank you all< !signature--> It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone. [This message has been edited by First__Knight (edited 06-11-2000).] |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
WOW I must say that you chose a lovely picture to accompany a lovely poem! Congratulations on a triumphant piece! If this doesn't have those other Knights quivering in their jodpurs I don't know what will! ~Heather PS Where did you get the pic? I am always on the lookout for awesome pics to go with my poetry....I have a John William Waterhouse fave..."Siren's Song" a gorgeous mermaid! |
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