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svtcobra
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since 2000-05-23
Posts 14
Syracuse,NY USA

0 posted 2000-06-09 01:53 AM


The smile on your face

The beaming in your eyes

The softness of your skin

The scent of your perfume

The passion in your touch

The beating of your heart

Why can't time stand still

© Copyright 2000 David J. Gassen - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
1 posted 2000-06-09 01:57 AM


How much do we wish to enjoy the beauty of such a divine moment, that we want time to stand still... moment well captured, svtcobra.

Thsn again, if time stands still, what will you or I do in any time frame, huh?? Life is relative to the passing of time, and this gives past moments to relive and rejoice...Sir Issac Newton, are you around ???

Nice work, svtcobra, and pardon my misdemeanour above...

Regards, sudhir..
I shut myself back to my pink floyd...and keep quiet asking...



 Hey you, out there in the cold,
Getting lonely, getting old, can you feel me?
Hey you, standing in the aisle,
With itchy feet and fading smile, can you feel me?
Hey you, don't help them to bury the light.
Don't give in without a fight.
Hey you, out there on your own,
Sitting naked by the phone, would you touch me?
Hey you, with your ear against the wall,
Waiting for someone to call out, would you touch me?
Hey you, would you help me to carry the stone?
Open your heart, I'm coming home....

by Roger Waters (Pink Floyd) - The Wall

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2000-06-09 02:00 AM


Very passionate and romantic...is ths to the challenge?
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