»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #7
»
Just Two Words
| Open Poetry #7 |
|
Just Two Words |
|
|
Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
lover's yearning passion burning lessons learning heads turning your eyes love's guise hidden surprise no good-byes your heart missing part new start feelings impart carnal desire both admire we tire extinguishing fire your touch too much life's such loving bunch we begin enter in i grin pleasure wins Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Jennifer L. Garcia - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Wolf, I have 1 word 4 your 2 word verse ... W O N D E R F U L  Coco |
||
|
SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~LW,...oh this takes the cake. The title??? superb...the content...your talent...mmm,,...superb as well. So well done. Aside from that....I think I am reading into an event that has taken place that may have been a bit painful???? Kick me if I'm wrong. hehe. Take care you. *Peace. |
||
|
Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Lone Wolf -- This is phenomenal! The title intrigued me. I don't know how I almost missed it. Precise and to the point. No use in wasting precious words, right?  "That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca |
||
Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ You rock You roll I read I scroll I like I do You rock YOU DO ! *Girl ... this one is brilliantly creative. I might just have a go at it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
||
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
fan the fire feel my desire flames reach higher kiss me once kiss me twice take me to paradise heat with in under the skin taste this sin... OK Ill stop or we'll have to go to adult LOL way cool poem LW nice with spice later-hot- gator  jm |
||
|
Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Lone Wolf, is cool, is true, poet wonderful. Two words, Of love, Of Pleasure, Like Treasure ..... Ok, enough of tom foolery from me, I am no good at this, so I simply stick around to saying that this one is a good poem, very unique and a brilliant idea... Many regards, sudhir. Back to the closet of pink floyd... Hey you, out there in the cold, Getting lonely, getting old, can you feel me? Hey you, standing in the aisle, With itchy feet and fading smile, can you feel me? Hey you, don't help them to bury the light. Don't give in without a fight. Hey you, out there on your own, Sitting naked by the phone, would you touch me? Hey you, with your ear against the wall, Waiting for someone to call out, would you touch me? Hey you, would you help me to carry the stone? Open your heart, I'm coming home.... by Roger Waters (Pink Floyd) - The Wall |
||
|
EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
You can say alot with just two words, great work! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
||
|
netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Wow Lonewolf. This was cool -- Well done ~netswan |
||
|
Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Lone Wolf, Very kewl poem m'friend Sorry, I haven't caught you on ICQ in a couple days, I've been a bit under the weather  feeling a little better now though All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
||
|
Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey LW, this is sooooooo Kewl sooooo creative and sooooo fantastic!! loved it. Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
||
|
tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
LW~ well worded your poem of two brought the best out in you GREAT  TC~< !signature--> Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 06-09-2000).] |
||
|
amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
beautiful poem two words!!!!!! |
||
|
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
LW~ Your two words sure do say A LOT. I LOVED this poem!! You write with such deep expression with just a few lines...amazing. did i mention, i really loved this poem?! lol. take care my friend. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
||
|
Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Two words: Well done! Eric |
||
|
Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
LW, your a Lady of few words. Two will do! ~~very nice writing~~ |
||
|
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You write. I grin... nuff said? Do again... |
||
|
Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you to all who took the time to read and reply to my two words. I am very touched by the response I got from this one. Special thanks to Marge and JM for their replies...you two are the best!! Serenity...will do, but I think I am going to adult with JM!! LOL Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
