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What Life Is Worth Living For (Sven's challenge #2)
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What Life Is Worth Living For (Sven's challenge #2) |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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Oh, the touch of your sweet lips as you gently kiss my cheek I see forever when I gaze into your eyes and suddenly my knees go weak I have been dreaming of this moment and what a sweet dream it is Having you here right by my side so this is what they call heavenly bliss? I have often wondred how true love feels my heart tells me to wonder no more For in your arms I've finally found what life is worth living for All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
very sweet and passionate...life without love is not worth livin ofor |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Jeffery, whilst I decided not to, you went ahead... what the heck, you have made the most out of the opportunity... All's fair in .... and ... Nice poem here, my friend, a subtly passionate one. Regards, sudhir. My heart is pounding, my stomach's inside out I'm feeling kind-a-shaky, my mind is full of doubt All I ever think about, is fearing fear itself, Wish I could unscrew my head and put it on the shelf Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Don't know what I'm looking at, the lights are all too bright My brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor Sweep 'em up. Throw 'em away, don't want 'em anymore Clouds race across the sky, day turns into night, Still there are the questions, no answers in sight Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Starin' out the window, everything is just too bright Brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor, Wish I could unscrew my head, and kick it out the door... You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange ~ Strange ~ Joe Satriani (Flying in a Blue Dream) |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Jeff!! This was so sweet! You truly are the hopeless romantic  . I loved readingthis and can't wait to see more. Take care. amy  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Oh how delightfully sweet, Jeffrey. So you found true love? Lucky you  ~netswan |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Oh my part 2 is better than the first, thy heart is beating stronger, with every word spoken, this fair maiden heart has been stirred, how magnificent this meeting occurred, by thy pen of thy poets hand, I have often dreamed of this fairytale land, now I believe... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Superb, Knight Carter! It seems that someones heart beats stronger! Thou hast indded done well What happens next? Only time will tell! Excellent grand Knight!! --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jeffrey, Just love it when you are sweet and romantic like this. Great writing my friend!! I agree, this is better than the first! LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Ain't that the truth...oh yes, you did a good write here Jeffrey. "I see forever when I gaze into your eyes". Your making me think about Lena. Enjoyed every minute of this. James |
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