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hippie_teen
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since 2000-05-18
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Escondido, CA, USA

0 posted 2000-06-08 09:26 AM


Where is he now?
     You say he exists,
But I ask you, how,
     Could he miss all of this?

The deaths of his people,
     Isn't enough,
To rebuild his steeples?
     Is it THAT tough?

But you clench your bible,
     And drop to your knees.
Thou claimst survival,
     Shall be cast on thee.

But we're all gonna' die,
     And you should know that.
I don't wanna' lie,
     But that's where we're at.

When your crosses burn down,
     And your bodies decay.
When there is no more ground,
     In which you may lay.
          No north, no south.
     What will you say,
          When you have no mouth,
     And there is no today?

You'll wish they would give
     You this when you fall,
Would you rather have lived,
     Or not live at all?

I can't say I'm right,
     You can't say I'm wrong,
But upon our blight,
     Please remember my song.
The future ain't bright,
     And it isn't that long.

© Copyright 2000 Nathan Preston Langford - All Rights Reserved
hippie_teen
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since 2000-05-18
Posts 18
Escondido, CA, USA
1 posted 2000-06-08 09:36 AM


My intention is not to threaten God fearing individualls, I am actually Christian myself.  I am merely asking that one question that plagues all men, "what if?"
hippie_teen
Junior Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 18
Escondido, CA, USA
2 posted 2000-06-08 11:21 AM


Oh yeah, this poem is dedicated to Samantha, who dared me to ask...
Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
3 posted 2000-06-08 05:20 PM


This is a great poem! I love it and I hope you keep your pen flowing. I just love the emotions in this piece!

 Nathan

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