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Starry Eyes |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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Starry Eyes Amy M. Kennedy the stars are in your eyes they shine so brightly at me when im with you how my soul flies and the heavens shine down completely angels come down from the sky to bask with us in our love your eyes can see my soul as we both sigh so precious...this love sent from above when we make love...the universe continues to turn lips meeting...bodies entwined and the passion flares...and for you i yearn as our spirts take off and begin to fly the flame of the candle...burning so bright as your eyes of lust and love drink me in and i say your name in the middle of the night and esctacy takes over...and out of control we spin all that matters is this moment...being with you as our bodies dance...in love, i am deep never known a more honest moment...something more true i close my eyes...holding you, as we fall fast asleep. "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
very well done amy woowoo wowowow i likes it alot! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
beautiful amy-girl star-struck and love struck... works for me  love ya when your smiling later amy-gator jm |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
Amy, this is beautiful! i remember feeling this way, once. i'm very glad you have the priveledge of feeling this way with someone. it's a rarity these days. i hope you hold on to these feelings and this person for a good long time. We all got somethin' we need to atone for. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Aim such beauty in this. I love the open honesty and the intense beauty, very lovingly written little aimy girl  Love TC~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've painted a beautiful picture of love and passion Amy ... excellent read! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
thanks everyone for your nice replies. you all continue to make me strive to be a better poet each and everyday... and for that i humbly thank you. love, amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Amy,...so real, so beautiful. Wow. Thanks for the read. Truly a great one. Take care. *Peace. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is a very beautiful and descriptive piece! Great job! Nathan |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautiful Amy, enjoyed it muchly.Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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