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Song Birds |
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sarahC Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 84Michigan |
the wind howls the moon draws nearer the song birds come out to play time is slowly creeping by in slumber I remain till daylight breaks and I pray for darkness to come again the day slowly fades so lonley so afraid can't go out can't stay in a prisoner I remain trapped by your poisonous love so confused endearing to your soul over and over in this twisted game you play I scream for it all to end yet still I remain as the song birds once again come out to play..... |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Can feel the emotional expression in this one. ~nice writing~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
SC~ you say so much with just a few simple words! this holds quite a bit of emotion in it. i look forward to reading more from you. great poem!! amy  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Sarah,...such an outpour of emotions here. So vividly written. Take care of you. Thanks for sharing. *Peace. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This poem is deep, I'm can't quite understand some of it but, I understand that it's a great piece! Nathan |
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