Feelings( Why do they change)

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Feelings( Why do they change)

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-06-07 09:03 PM

Does anyone know,why?
Feelings change so abruptly.
Seems like the way I feel changes so
consistently.
I suppose that's one thing I know stays constant.
Why do feelings change?
One minute my heart pitter patters
and then the next doesn't even flutter.
I don't know.
Do you think that it's just a pattern
of my surmise?
I really do know this.
This I can't resist.
The way you smile.
The way you touch.
The way I react to you.
This I know.
This doesn't change,
So maybe it's just I want you more.
Nothing more to say.
Except end this with a kiss
and you know just who you are.
Feelings do change this I know
but one thing I know my hearts in your hands
so be careful with my lifes most emotional part that I so passionately gave to you.

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

1 posted 2000-06-08 04:47 PM

Very nice poem.

amazon_lover
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

2 posted 2000-06-08 05:01 PM

Hi Rose
Thats a really touching poem. When we give ourself to some person trusting she's the one it very difficult to even think of it in our dreams that she can destroy it. But when it happens pain and anger just flows without control. I've felt it and its a sh**.

Sincerely
A_L

MagnoliaBlue
Member

since 2000-05-12

Posts 367

3 posted 2000-06-08 05:04 PM

Good thoughts expressed here in this poem...

Sometimes people rush into relationships and are not entirely being themselves while doing it.

We can't resist being ourselves and so then we step back and look at who we are with...

and we see a stranger...

someone we hardly know at all.

Walk slowly, get to know someone before you offer your heart...then and only then, when it is truly the one for you...give that person your all.

Good luck!

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ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2000-06-08 05:10 PM

What a great way to start. Good hook and a very touching finish.

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