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sarahC Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 84Michigan |
We have one stolen hour a secret glance a passing touch how did this begin? how does this end? two lost and lonely hearts longing to be touched by a stranger? loved too much? two empty souls yearning for forever.. seconds minutes untold desires... whispered in the night.... friendship turned intimate so innocent....... can't break free you don't belong to me or...me to you how rare a love like this how far do we take it? two days too soon, two days two long, It feels too right.... to be so wrong...... |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Oh Sarah... Belive me, I know just how you feel. It's all very too confusing. I often wonder why we're allowed to be put into a position like this and "fall" when it's not right. What a wonderful poem and so well expressed.  Welcome to the Passions Family. Look forward to your next post. ~Sheri |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Very nice poetry you've shared here Sarah Look forward to more of your poetic verses Coco |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
sarahC, A good first post, welcome to passions. An interesting subject, a chance meeting, a sudden flash of passion....how far is too far. Well done. INclan |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to Passions! Excellent poem, I look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email for a special welcome.  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sarah, I think most of here have been there at one time or another. Great writing. Welcome to Passions and I am looking forward to more for you. LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Great poem Sarah We humans are frail beasties where matters of the heart are concerned... the heart just takes control and the head goes out the window. Whatever path this leads you down, I wish you a safe journey.Eric. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
We all have longings, sometimes just for a few moments of tenderness, regardless how right or wrong it may be. sarahC, you did an excellent job expressing this in your poem. ~~nice writing~~ and welcome to these wonderful hall of poetry. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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hippie_teen Junior Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 18Escondido, CA, USA |
This is a beautiful poem, it truely touched my heart. Keep up the good writing, and welcome to the forum! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
HI Sarah and WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!! so nice to meet you. i love this poem... you have wrote my heart in it... oh how I realte... you express your emotions well, I look forward to more of your work. take care, jm I think I could need - this in my life I think I'm just scared - that I know too much I can't relate and that's a problem I'm feeling ... If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home There's an awful lot of breathing room But I can hardly move If you're gone - baby you need to come home cuz there's a little bit of something me... In everything in you. ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Hi Sarah! Great poem...Welcome to Passions!! ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
so touching , Hi Sarah, I agree with everyone else on this. I guess sometimes love is in all the wrong places but your absolutely right when you say, whether it's a second or minute. After all love is love,welcome |
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PoetasterD Junior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 42Florida |
sarahC, I really like this poem alot. I understand these feelings so well! The line "friendship turned intimate" that you used is similar to the first line of a poem I wrote, "Intimate Kiss", which is also about a forbidden love. But in the case of my poem, the relationship never actually took place. It is but a wishful dream of a lonley heart. It is posted on the Adult forum if you are interested. Thanks again for you lovely poem. Best wishes! Poetaster D |
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