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Will You Forget Me??
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Will You Forget Me?? |
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SorrowsMystress Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 178I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I don't live in one particular area, Just wherever I end up. 
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Will you forget me < !signature-->In those long desprate nights Or will you always remember Those sick and twisted fights? Will you forget me While you're waiting for the time To come when you will love me again Or will you leave me behind Will you forget me When the clouds have all cleared? Will you forget the things That we said to eachother endeared Will you forget me During your time alone? Will you find somebody else So you wouldn't be on your own Will you forget me In the years to come? Would you ever remember The time you loved me some Will you please remember how much I loved you so And keep in mind my memory Keep with you my soul... *Ok... I know it's not that good, it's been a while since I've really written anything, and with my mind being such a jumble of thoughts, it's hard to sort them out enough to write something really good... writers block sure isn't any fun* "It was my love that did us both to death. " -Sylvia Plath [This message has been edited by SorrowsMystress (edited 06-07-2000).] |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
you are joking I thought it was a good one. Writers block can be a pain i'm still recovering  We are all poets, its just some people dont know it yet. |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi SM It was a nice read. I see so much of emotion in your poem. Keep it up. Sincerely A_L |
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sarahC Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 84Michigan |
The best poems come when you have jumbled thoughts..just keep writing them down...you would be surprised what they end up being..I liked it! Good job!! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Very nice .. I liked this one you write Coco |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
SorrowMystress this is Great! Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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