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The Rain |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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~The Rain~ < !signature-->Amy M. Kennedy The memories play over again in my mind The memeories of you and me As the rain comes falling down Ever so gently With ever drop of rain I remember your face And I wish you were here Your sweet beautiful grace We made love to the rain Oh what sweet ecstacy Forever in you arms I could lay...for all eternity Remember the words we said The words we still mean When we held each other tight This love is what it seems The rain is falling falling with a fierce intensity And deeper I fall in love with you Today forever always "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 06-05-2000).] |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautifully done.  Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Wonderful once again, Amy! Elizabeth And this I say to you: why? Why? Just tell me why, so I can understand. Why? |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Amy, This is very well done. I particularly like the subject matter. Rain is so often chosen to display sadness and longing and you have chosen to use it to be the desired subject. To long for the rain if you will. Rob |
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Dragon's Soul Junior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 25 |
I have to agree with RSE You have done a wonderful job I love the rain and find many wonderful memories in the rain Excellent poem |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
your writing just keeps getting better and better girl and its taken on many new styles as well... love watching you grow my sweet jm I think I could need - this in my life I think I'm just scared - that I know too much I can't relate and that's a problem I'm feeling ... If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home There's an awful lot of breathing room But I can hardly move If you're gone - baby you need to come home cuz there's a little bit of something me... In everything in you. ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful Amy ... it flows as sweetly as it's subject matter, lovely verse! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Amy~ Beautiful...just...beautiful! ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Amy, I absolutely love this poem.....it brings back many memories for me of the rain. I wish you the best! PG |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Amy this one is beautiful!  Coco |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Beautiful! Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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