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I know that you don't love me
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I know that you don't love me |
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SorrowsMystress Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 178I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I don't live in one particular area, Just wherever I end up. 
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I know that you don't love me That it will take some time Just please reconsider Blocking me from your life I know you were not happy That you needed space Just please think of this Whenever you see my face I have given you my all My heart, my soul, just me That which I promised to no one I just wanted to be free But when I met you You were everything and more That I could ever want That I could ever adore. I know that things got complicated I know that things got bad I wish I could have made you happy While refraining from being sad But now you've given me a chance A small chance, but one nonetheless And I will show you, prove to you I will do my best I know that you don't love me Don't know if you ever will But in that case I'll give you up And walk the melancholy hill I will live without you As much as it hurts to do Just remember the good times And that I've always loved you *(I'm really not satisfied with this piece, still needs a lot of work, but hey, gimme a break, i haven't even had my first cup o' coffee yet. hehehe)* "It was my love that did us both to death. " -Sylvia Plath |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
there was a time I too could have said these words...and now, my heart is so full of his love...sweet yet sad..thanks for sharing |
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Slashed soul Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 86England |
-This really touched me, I know precisely how you feel, and what you are going through- You feel the pain of love lost, It cuts deep sweetie....I have loved and lost recently, but i have reached the point of moving forward and not looking back into the fog from which I came. You will be fine. there is always someone for you...... take care Miss. -Rich- |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
So coffee is your inspiration huh....ha..ha.. I think the presentation is together...I enjoyed reading this poem...I wish the best for you in the love department. James |
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sarahC Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 84Michigan |
Very well said..I enjoyed it...I am sure there are alot of us that can realate. Good job. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Mystress, this is heartfelt expression you share here on page Very nice poem indeed Coco |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I know you said it wasn't done yet, but I like it just the way it is. You have spoken volumes to my heart here. Great writing. Just wish I could say I have never felt that way, but I have and know how you feel all to well. All you can do is let go and hope it comes back...then it is truly yours. Best wishes to you.  LW |
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