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In the garden |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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In the garden I wonder…. what would be your favourite flower? A yellow rose? It is my favourite, smile but I guess you already know that…. I wish you were here I know you'd hold me in your arms and tell me everything will be alright next week, I will come to see you and I'll bring 2 yellow roses one for you and one for me together we can marvel at the beauty they possess then you will smile and I will cry for I will have to leave you there in the garden with all the other children that God took away Dark Angel 6/6/00 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is so touching and heartfelt Dark Angel ... Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, my friend~  And one from me. Beautifully tender. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You have written so tenderly. James |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
So touching and beautifully written..... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Kit, thank you  Marge awww Thank You so much *hugs*Jamie, thank you Munda thank you very much. Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful. Just so sad though!  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dark Angel--such a sad poem from your heart..and beautiful! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Whoa, the end here hit me like a ton of bricks! My favorite in sadness this one is! I love the ending DA! Think bout the sis are we? |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
for I will have to leave you there in the garden with all the other children that God took away a travesty of justice indeed... lovely writing, Dark Angel. regards, sudhir Hey you, out there in the cold, Getting lonely, getting old, can you feel me? Hey you, standing in the aisle, With itchy feet and fading smile, can you feel me? Hey you, don't help them to bury the light. Don't give in without a fight. Hey you, out there on your own, Sitting naked by the phone, would you touch me? Hey you, with your ear against the wall, Waiting for someone to call out, would you touch me? Hey you, would you help me to carry the stone? Open your heart, I'm coming home.... by Roger Waters (Pink Floyd) - The Wall |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sharon, thanks so much hon Thank you Martie Glad you loved it Angel yes thinking about the Sis. Thank you Sudhir, glad you enjoyed. Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Dark Angel, So sad yet tender, my friend. Wonderfully expressed. It is always the good ones that get taken. So sorry if this is a true poem. You have my sympathy and love. HUGS LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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