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Open Poetry #7

If you had to go

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2000-06-07 07:02 PM

Everybody knows,
We're deeply in love
And never be apart
Till the end of time,
Love was so true,
Meant to be like this,
But,
They say,
Now time has come,
To move on our lives,
Till we can give ourselves
To eachother,
If the time really came for us,
To say goodbye
And you wanted to leave,
If you had to go,
Please love me,
Then leave me,
I won't stop you,
you can do any thing,
It's your life,
But remember me,
If you had to leave me,
Don't forget all the love
I gave to you,
If you had to go,
Please kiss me godbye,
There were so many resons to give,
I understand
Why you had to go,
But before you leave ,
Kiss me,
Once ,
And I,
Will know you still love,
Before you had to leave me,
If you had to go away,

amazon_lover
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

1 posted 2000-06-07 07:08 PM

HI Vandana
That was so beautifully expressed when lovers had to part under some undesirable circumstances.

Sincerely
A_L

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

2 posted 2000-06-07 07:10 PM

Oh Vandana, my heart is touched with this one

Coco

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2000-06-07 08:10 PM

Truly a sad poem.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2000-06-07 08:12 PM

Vandana,

This one was sad, but I love the expression you used. Great writing here!! Oh, if we could all part that way...

LW

Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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