Open Poetry #7 |
Dopedealer ( repost from Dark Passions... possible fave of mine!!) |
kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
She has unending supply Of their constant demand. It shines bright Like diamond light. No matter where, They always know. Can smell it on her bones. Like water, they crave it- Begging please to enter. Open sesame? Wheat? Rye? Plain? Always surpass her shallow soothing waters, Jump feet first in her Deep enveloping end. This poor girl. Tired of all these laps, Wishin' she could just wade. ... look at the curvaceous coral reefs, marvel at the rainbow of creatures beneath, childlike wonder, playing with glee... But, no. These fiends salivate for more. Drooling for depths no man hath dared go before. Fools. Little do they know. So many soft, delicate treasures In her waters low. Hidden entrances to caves that require a pace Oh, so slow; Deep, warm and comforting, Revealing heights never known. Hers is a heavy road to hoe. Destined, it would seem, to be Pursued by those who only need, Those addicted to the high They hope she just might feed. Knocks on her door, Phone calls at three in the morn, Afternoon delight so sickeningly sweet--- "C'mon, baby!! You know you want some company!!" *****kynder The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Kynder,...wow, this is deep and powerfully written. Uuummm,...well, I read a poem of yours before that I had a few interpretations for and this here one sort of relates to one of my interpretations....not that this makes any sense, but heck,..I like your writing. Keep 'em coming. Take care. *Peace. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i like this poem as we'll but i'm a fan of more of your other work. but still great job. also i'm reading all of your poems I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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