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I Need Some Input Please!!!!! |
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**Tammy** Junior Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 14 |
Poem #1 The Holyness of the Holy The Loneliness of the Lonely The Worthlessness of the Worthless Holding it inside trying not to let it out, Is what it's all about Nobody needs to know Nobody wants to know It's what you don't want you have and what you want you can't have Poem #2 The darkness as swallowed me. Iam forced to go with the flow. My life is no longer my control. The senses which I have obtained are now as useless as the times. Get a little and lose a lot. Poem #3 Like a dying tree in a long forgotten forest. Worn away by time and the constant sound os silence. Alone and forgotten about, But now awake and bursting with life, but no one to show off to so spirts dampens and then slowly die. start to fade away, and gradually enter into the final steps of death, then realize the whole point of living, is to die! Poem #4 Iam stuck with the two of you I need nor want either one of you You do nothing for me I feel nothing for you You won't shut up I am stuck with pain inside, that won't let up It's not likely that I'll have an up day But when I do your always there to kick me down to make me blue So for all of the above thank you so much, for making me the way you do! |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Tamma I think you're stuck with wrong people and that's what hurts you most. Feel free and share what you want with the people you trust. Sincerely A_L |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Nice writing here. I can also say to pull yourself up from your emotional state right now. I know where you are, and it could only get worse if you let it.  Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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