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Brom Junior Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 16 |
Fade to Black I got a bottle of vodka. Helping me drown my sorrow. I just don't care anymore. If I live to see tomorrow. All of life’s pressures. Are starting to take their toll. Just can't seem to get a grip. I feel I am losing my control. I can feel myself falling. Into what seems like a bottomless pit. No matter how hard I try. There seems no way out of it. Makes no difference what I do or say. I just can't seem to win. Maybe I should face the facts. And just give in. So I guess this my last goodbye. I have reached the point of no turning back. The end has finally arrived. Fade to black. Love will be the end of us... |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Brom Its sad and I wish you the best in overcoming the obstacles. Sincerely A_L |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Though sad, this is a wonderful well written poem ------find your way out of that abyss -- Life is just full of wonderful things such as writing a great piece of poetry such of this. THAT IS A WIN --) ~netswan |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Brom, Sad and moving poem. The end was PERFECT!!!! Very well done. Please know that you are not alone. Feel free to e-mail or look me up on icq if you need someone to talk to. Looking forward to reading more of your work. LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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