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His Creative Hands
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His Creative Hands |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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His Creative Hands I'm daydreaming of his creative hands touching...analyzing...and deciding what course of action would be best for me. He stretches...he gazes... he plans his strategy all the while I tingle all over. He gently frames my intrigued face he casts away split ends leaving softness, he adds highlights to growing strands of life his glowing warmth dedicating design. He brushes...he gathers each piece into place he offers reflection for inspection his final masterpiece is my delight. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
that was beautiful, a wonderful poem. I really enjoyed reading it. He gently frames my intrigued face he casts away split ends leaving softness, he adds highlights to growing strands of life his glowing warmth dedicating design. ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany Culture, alienation, boredom and despair" "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
In case anyone did not realize, this is about a person in a specific profession.  |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Brian: I missed you while I was explaining, thank you very much I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LostDreamer~ 'Only her hairdresser knows for sure !' Nicely done. Hope the hair turned out as well. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lost Dreamer, Great piece!! Amazing what they can do isn't it? Make you look like a whole new you!! So original in the concept. Lone Wolf Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I knew right away  . This is such a great poem...so true huh? heehee. Thanks for posting it. *Peace. |
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*His Fantasy* New Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 1 |
I caught the specific profession, but also enjoyed reading more into the poem than met the eye. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Oh my goodness ! Who's your hairdresser ? Can I make an appointment ? Great poem Gloria ! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i got tricked with this one ..good job losty |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
LOL Very good, Gloria! Very creative! What would we do without those 'artists'? Denise |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
...oops...sorry Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 06-06-2000).] |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I Thank all of you for reading and replying, I did not get my hair styled as so it would seem, I found out recently there is this nice looking guy who is a stylist so I was imagining what it would be like to have him style my hair. I have never had a male style my hair in my life, but I'd sure be willing to try this guy if I was not growing my hair. I don't know if I could handle myself if I did go to him anyway...LOL |
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