Open Poetry #7 |
Lost Love |
Dragon's Soul Junior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 25 |
Blood stains the sand So i slipped this once went to far stepped over the edge I was the one who hurt Why should the blood stain my shirt You stabbed me in the back All i ever did was love you So why do i stand here in the sand with blood on my hands |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Wow cool poem Dragon's Soul! The imagery of a broken heart is great! ~netswan |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
intense stuff. loved it. really vivid. |
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Rhavin Junior Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 28 |
Kick butt poem dragonsoul. I really love the way you too describe personal pain. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Dragon Soul, First off welcome to Passions!! Excellent name....I love it!!! Okay, very powerful intense writing. You convey your message very well. I hope that you find solace for your pain. Looking forward to more of your work. Lone Wolf Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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