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Open Poetry #7

Lost Love

Dragon's Soul
Junior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 25

0 posted 2000-06-06 12:23 PM

Blood stains the sand
So i slipped this once
went to far
stepped over the edge

I was the one who hurt
Why should the blood stain my shirt
You stabbed me in the back

All i ever did was love you
So why do i stand here in the sand
with blood on my hands

netswan
Senior Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 1369
Washington

1 posted 2000-06-06 12:35 PM

Wow cool poem Dragon's Soul!
The imagery of a broken heart
is great!

~netswan

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

2 posted 2000-06-06 06:51 AM

intense stuff. loved it. really vivid.

Rhavin
Junior Member

since 2000-05-27

Posts 28

3 posted 2000-06-06 08:23 PM

Kick butt poem dragonsoul. I really love the way you too describe personal pain.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2000-06-06 08:28 PM

Dragon Soul,

First off welcome to Passions!! Excellent name....I love it!!!

Okay, very powerful intense writing. You convey your message very well. I hope that you find solace for your pain. Looking forward to more of your work.

Lone Wolf

Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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