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What A Possibility |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I reach out to you Through the barriers of space and time Never thought it would be possible After you had died Could it really be your voice Cominf through the darkness How I longed to hear that sound Like music that I wished to hear At first I doubted it was you But now I am convinced I warn you of your impending demise Which alters all events We work hard to make things right Not an easy road that we take But in the end the outcome stands At last I reach out and take your hand This is the present I longed to have All those years without you here Darkened the days and haunted the nights Fought to save you with all my might I am so thankful for this time Your light has such a bright shine Lights up my saddened heart Like you always did from the start This is just something I came up with after seeing the movie Frequency last weekend. Kind of made me think about life and death....if such a realization is indeed possible as it was in the movie. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Something in this made me sad. Made me want to cry. Effective writing. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Lone Wolf, I wanted to see this movie before I read this poem...but now I REALLY want to see it  This in my opinion (for what it's worth) is, by far, your best work All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Dragon's Soul Junior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 25 |
Excellent poem for all my opinion is worth which is probably less than Lone Wolf's It has a very sad tone to it yet it instills that little bit of hope we all need to make it through the loss of a loved one once again an excellent poem |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ I haven't seen the movie, but I have 'seen'. Powerful thoughts, nicely done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
How strange you would write this piece at this time Lone Wolf. Someone told me just a few days ago that they had seen the movie too. He said he thought it would be something I would like. You certainly caught my attention with this poem......well done! Marina |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Temptress....Thank you, sorry to make you sad. In a way it was, but the ending was happy. Jeffrey....Go see it, my friend!! It's excellent!!! Your opinion is worth a lot to me, Jeff....you know that!! Thank You!!! Dragon's Soul....Thank you very much. Everyone's opinion counts and I thank you for yours. There is always hope...always. Marge....Glad you have seen. I knew somehow, you had my friend. Thank you!! Marina....it is a great movie...yes, go and judge for yourself. Hope I didn;t ruin it for anyone!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Wow LoneWolf - such a lot of insight. Death - we each die a little more from the moment of birth, yet it is such a tough subject for so many. Beautifully done. I have not seen the movie either. ~netswan |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
netswan... Thanks my friend!!!! Great movie if you're looking to get away from that computer for a while!!! I agree we all die a little at a time....the final death is just the end of that. LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi LW That was a beautiful imagination to conquer time and space . Sincerely A_L |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Wolf such creative talent at its best form I really like this one you share And now I will indeed see this movie!  Coco |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
~nice writing LW~~haven't seen the movie but may do so later. brought out your talent for sure. very nice. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
A_L....Thank you, I got the idea from the movie where they definitely do that. Coco....Happy to share it with you. I loved the movie BTW. Danny....Thank you, I am trying to stretch myself more these days to see just where that talent will take me. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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